All Comments on 'Transforming Genevieve Ch. 04'

Fantastic story. I had a hard on all the way through it. The discription of the way you dressed was so good, I could almost see you there.

So well written! Your descriptions are so detailed they create such beautiful, erotic images.

I hope there will be more installments of Genevieve's story... Perhaps she will discover a greater love for even higher heeled shoes - I know the descriptions of her thoughts and actions will be fantastic!

my wife would undergo such a transformation, but just for me.

Keep going!

well and truly a cock sucking fuck slut whore - just like all women are

Why are you even reading this story if it’s annoying you so much? We get it your ex did the dirty on you and that’s a shitty thing to go through, life will improve over time. However, if you let whatever it was that happened colour your outlook on life you’ll stay bitter.

As I’ve said whatever happens between consenting adults is their own business. In this chapter Genevive crossed lines that she shouldn’t have, first with the student and secondly with a married man. She didn’t just stray across a couple of lines she bloody well galloped at full speed. As erotic fiction there is lea way because it’s not real if it was real life then it’s just plain stupid and wrong. With the student she’s clearly in the wrong, with the married man she should know better. He should have said no and left things at the flirting stage. She’s supposed to be an intelligent woman, right now I’m not seeing it.

In this chapter, the story changes from erotic couplings at the beginning to romance later on. The length of the love scene in this chapter is fully justified, because at all times it carefully and subtly advances the plot. Beautifully written, this chapter gives the reader a heart-warming romantic atmosphere in this exceptionally fine story.

Fantastic! i wish i could

describe how well written this was.