All Comments on 'Tybalt and Juliet Ch. 01'

Thank you for a romantic story involving 2young people who as characters you took the time to develop . You also took the time to develop a believable supporting cast

Please continue

Ed

Drat! Where's the rest of it?

Choreographing the fight scene was a nice touch.

Minor correction: Were the outlets form amplifiers or for amplifiers?

Now, please, finish Ch. 02.

You've got me!

I'm loving it!

I thought I'd just browse a few paragraphs...

but if felt like home!

No, I'm American...

But your story feels authentic throughout!

With all the Brit details...true to itself!

I'm on the same page with KingCuddle. I love the levity of your writing, mixed with enough seriousness to capture the teenage angst. I'm hooked on all your works and if all Brits write like you then I'm hooked for the foreseeable future.

You made the scene on the bench with photos so real I was transported back to my experiences at that age. Fantastic

Love the start of this story! Quite the best I've read in a while.