All Comments on 'Under New Management Ch. 02'

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D-ManD-Manabout 12 years ago
Nice

Love stripper stories. Keep up the good work!

catman71catman71about 12 years ago
he is a cad

and i hope he gets his comeuppance , and learns something

MisruleMisruleabout 12 years ago

It's developing nicely. Please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very good

I like where this is going. Please keep on developing the relationship between Brett and Lia, it feels like the story can grow and grow !

PanicByNumbersPanicByNumbersabout 12 years ago
Like it a lot.

You should have one of the girls suck him off while he's on a conference call. Love how the girls are just throwing themselves at him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent!

This series is excellent! Keep it going!

ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilover 11 years ago
Even better

Still incredibly hot but also emotional. One of the best stories I have seen here.

spankfunforspankfunforover 8 years ago
Cliff Hanger!

I'm Rooting For Lia! Great Plot!

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Hey. I'm a guy from Denmark, Europe who enjoys reading and writing erotic short stories (perhaps a bit too much...). Feed-back is very appreciated. Ego-stroking feed-back ("Great story!" e.g.) and concrete suggestions ("the last scene was a bit of a turn-o...

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