All Comments on 'Under New Management'

Liked the starting chapter very much and can't wait to see whats next. Send'em out.

It's fun to read stories about the newness of sex. And jumping in with both feet into a hot bed of sex makes for a great story! It's a great fantasy. This is also written quite well--describing not just actions but feelings and perceptions. So, am looking forward to the next chapters!

An acquaintance once inherited a thriving strip club. Problem was he was a diehard religious person. He was going to shut it down or sell it. His wife wouldn't let him and insisted she would run it. 5 years later the wife was divorced, owned and managed the strip club.... For him it was the worst that could happen. For his wife? A gold mine!

After reading Under New Management I was not only impressed with the authors style of writing but also the way the story flows and look foward to see how the new and inexperienced club owner fares please post the rest.

great start, loved it.

Looking forward to the rest of the trilogy

I thoroughly enjoyed your story and looking forward to a lot more and include all the girls and the manager as well, now that will be a feat!! Just keep writing the way you have been and continue on in that trend >> Thanks

This is shaping up to be a fantastic series. Plenty of dramatic potential, with Bret being pulled every which way. I liked the detail you put into the characters, particularly the old lawyer - who could easily have been just a walking plot-device but here becomes just roguish enough to be entertaining. Would be nice to see Bret go to him for advice once the feathers start to fly.

As for suggestions on how to proceed, I do wonder how Bret's colleagues at work will deal with him quitting (this could also give us some insight into Bret's character and background). It's not inconceivable that they should find out he now owns a strip club, and start to hound him for "special treatment". After all, the more problems Bret has, the more satisfying the conclusion (up to a point, of course) as those problems are finally solved.

Anyway, all that aside - great job on this, and I look forward to reading more!

looking forward to more of it.

Don't stop writing this series. Very good start. Your story has me fixated on that delectable waitress. I would love to read about that nasty, old lawyer Marcus getting to finish what he started with Wendy in a nc/reluctant setting. That would be just one of many diverse chapters made possible with the variety of characters available to you dear author. Do write soon and my gratitude.

This is just a terrific story that is also incredibly HOT! The set up with the old lawyer, the naivete of the new owner and the politics of all the competing strippers made for compelling and exciting reading. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The tension created with the nervous interaction between the new boss and all his new employees, showed the wonderful humanity of all the characters. Oh do I wish I was Bret. Great story...can't wait for part 2.

Great story -look forward to next part.

Liked the build up. Hope it continues.

Excellent story! Keep it up. At some point, Bret needs to do Tina too.

Great start. This group would be ripe for a public competition.

Keep up the good work

That's a great story. I love the way this plot is going. Please write a next chapter!

I would really liked it if there would be a romance developing between him and Lia...

great story so far .you said you had two more chapters.when are we going to see them?

Another great story, keep going with it.

Great story. Hot, well paced and interesting characters.

I fear for Bret. He seemed such a good boy.

I too, too fear for him.

Jesus! I don't think if you tried you could make this dude any more pathetic.

It's difficult to get into the hotness of this story with such a wuss as the protagonist. Writing jargon aside, the guy is pathetically weak. Hard to get into the story with that.

The Right Way To Start a 22 Year Old Virgin With His Own Strip Club! He Had To Begin and Fuck His Way To Better Business! His Women Are Extremely Eager To Keep Their Job! You Have Lots Of Positions For The Boss To Use Them! I'm Enjoying Every Word! Don't Stop!

There's really no such thing as an "eight minute long song" in a strip club, and BBBJ (with a swallow!) for a customer is very rare in them either.

This is awful and should be under "nonconsent". It's a misogynist fantasy of raping sex workers