by randibyrnes
interesting little story here. I enjoyed that discourse you opened with. Leap in without all those expected and boring statistical points of age and bust size. Let a reader build the image of what they think is sexy.
Very erotic and well written.
Vacations bring on a very different mood don't they?
Well written and I agree about not wasting time with age, height, bust size, eye color etc.
A good story but I felt that the ending was abrupt. How does the rest of the vacation play out now that they have gotten together? What about their boyfriends? Definitely room for a sequel.
I've enjoyed your other stories so far, but this one is GREAT! Looking forward to more.