by Archer2050
Hot, bothered and in need of relief after reading this one!! Are additional chapters being written for this storyline? Please place pen to paper or should that be fingertips to keyboard. Thank you.
you establish a great setting and mood for the story.
You post that it will be continued, but didn't fulfill your promise. Posting other stories about the same person is not the same as completing your promise. A finish, of almost any direction, would have made this a memorable story.
What will Jill think about her husband and Penny when Jill returns with the cops....Penny in handcuffs....wow.....