All Comments on 'Unicorns'

Your story was very sweet yet erotic...well done.

Yeah - I was gonna say sweet! Very well written - you have a definite talent.

Lukas

An enjoyable waking!

An enjoyable awakening!

Most unicorn stories are just about virgins being able to see them. So to have yours written this way was a definite treat. Thank you so much for it.

What a nice piece of writing. I like your style and word choice. I also like the ending; I wasn't even thinking of her turning into a Unicorn, but she did. Well done!

This was a weird but interesting story.

It is too short, and lame "a girl gets raped by a unicorn and turns into one, big freakin whoopdeedoo"

And well done. I'd love to be Chosen