by SimonDoom
You told so much, so very beautifully much, I'm under 750 words that my happiness after reading this knows no bounds.
Excellent work!
Deserves to be expanded to o longer version with a slower seduction. I’m glad she kept her choker and heels on.
Well, it proves 750 words are an inadequate amount to fully express the potential backlash that comes with incest. These two treat their coupling like it’s perfectly normal to fuck a family member.
This could have been better if you hadn't chosen tho limit out to 750 words. Maybe you will consider re-writing this story and expanding it.
Well done with your short essay, your tryst with Mother, AND your entry in the 750 word contest.
Only onever question ; Could you not have selected 7, SEVEN words to precisely match the contest ?
Quite enjoyed your effort.
In response to the Anonymous comment: The body of the story is exactly 750 words long. The extra seven are the author's note at the top, which the Site added at my request. I don't think that counts.
1st off - 5 stars.
Secondly I agree with others that a longer version (if you so decide) would be a hell of a lot more TITillating.
Good story. The transition to thesex was a little abrupt, but it was very well written.
I realize why the story was written. For a short story, it was interesting; however, based on the skill of the author, this could be developed into a good series.
Beautiful story almost the same happened to me and my mother 8 moth's after my father died.
An interesting short story, I am glad that you warned us that this was a word limited competition entry, something that other reviewers do not seem to have taken notice of. A serious amount of action has been packed into so few words, the concept could easily be extended into a very interesting series.
No set up. No build up to the actual sex. No description of the mother and son. No description of the actual sex and on and on with the errors. Sort or an “I came, I saw, I came in her. Good-by!”
Very good story for the contest category. Clearly some people didn’t read the preface about being an entry in a 750-word contest.
Short & sweet & to the point. I sure wish my mom had been so easy. 🙄 she didn't drink but she loved to flirt & tease by allowing me to spy on her. But when I tried to make a move or get closer or touch her she would always pull away from me. 🤔 🤷 guess she was afraid of crossing the line with me her oldest, best looking son. For fear she might discover a true lasting loyal love once & for all.
Good work for 750 words. Having Dad out of the picture permanently might be nice, his Mom is cheating at this point....
Well done
Not to jump on the dog pile, but it could have used being fleshed out a little more. Decent enough work. thanks
It sounded forced and made it hard to read and he basically licked her pussy a few times and then stuck it in without warming her up no way in hell does that work it's not even remotely possible it would hurt too much for the woman not even in a fantasy could it work this story was trash and only deserves a 1 star rating if I could give 0 stars I would I really hope this isn't the best you can do
Those complaining about it going too fast and needing to be fleshed out: KINDA HARD WHEN YOU ONLY HAVE 750 WORDS MAX!
"Valentine's Day With Mom:" - Twenty-four Year Old Single, Non-attached Son, Unnamed and Early Forties Divorced Mother, Unnamed.
When one is very limited with minimal capacity, ergo, seven hundred fifty (750) words for mother and son love story, it's extremely difficult to produce a worthy project. The writer/author does deserve accolades, as the story theme is handled very nicely. I think it's lovely that a son and his loving mother incubator are able--and willing--to make Mother's Day as enjoyable as possible. Writer/author 'SimonDoom' has rendered a commendable and worthy story. If nothing else, it does make us owe a debt of gratitude to our most favorite person--personally, sexually and prolific!!
Every person should celebrate Mother's Day to their fullest extinct as possible; we all owe her that much recognition and love! February 15th all restrictions are removed!!!!!
Word Correction: To my prior comment four (4) days ago, last sentence: Word should be: EXTENT...not extinct!!
P,S, Here's HOPING every "Swinging Dick" Literotica member DID give their Mother their very best Mother's Day job of LOVE and FUCKING, physically, emotionally, spiritually, sexually: Happy Mother's Day.....Mom!