All Comments on 'Vegas Ch. 08'

Daniel needs to open his eyes and run far away from Grace, she is the worst of the worst, he's not much better but she has not only sold her body but her soul to scum.

The only major change I would make to this chapter(and to the previous one) is to cater more to the readers of erotica. The two chapters end with sizeable segments dwelling on Daniel's poker fortunes, rather than the twists and turns of the original trio's sex lives. This is NOT a poker story. It is an erotic tale happened to be centered on a poker tournament. It would have better to end on an erotic note. Still and all, an impressive bit of writing by a first-time author. Can't wait for CH 9!!!

Of course there is an erotic tale... and it's a very good one too. Personally I don't play poker but I find the mix between poker and eroticism quite appealing. I'm into both aspects now!