by DarlingNikki
Thank you for writing this love story. I loved the slow exciting build up and at the end the erotic making love to each other. Keep writing please!
I too had a volunteer love affair in Calcutta...and this lovely story brought back very similar happy memories....of a sensuous city, of heat, of lust, of Mosquitos.....
You're seriously one of the best writers on here, Nikki. I've got a dick but this was so vivid I almost felt my pussy get wet. So many writers of erotica think it's porn, they place their focus externally on what people look like or what they're doing, when the whole point of why written erotica works so well is that it allows us to invert our focus internally, so we can feel everything around us so acutely and personally, until we feel the whole world is an extension of our body, you know. And you just get that.
This is a well written and I love reading a story from a woman's perspective. It definitely has all of the elements for a sexy, arousing story but is also believable.