by Many Feathers
Yes, nice. A bit over the top, as usual, maybe not too realistic, but it's great fantasy! And maybe somebodies crossed a line while blind-folded?
Very nice series and i enjoyed it very much. It would have been awesome though if you continued the story and let them actually have sex with each other.
You quit when it was getting good ... I hope you're planning on adding more chapters.
and then it fizzled out at the end...no doubt they had all been fucking each other - dad and daughter - mother and son - and the two kids but didn't need to be so long winded and drawn out....
One of the best stories here on Literotica. Nich character development and plot moved along.
Just wish you would write more.
I'll just have to be content with some of your other stories. This one could use another five chapters! A '10' all round.
I do not usually like family sex because it can go all wrong causing real problems BUT. This family seems to be mature--all of them-- and very well can handle it. Seems real funny how a reader can actual think it becomes real. It seems to me you either got tired of writing about this family or you just wanted us to get a wee bit upset. Finish please by doing at least double more. Thank you.
please continue this is a very good story but you just can't leave us hanging like that. please continue
I agree with the rest of the comments, great story but it seems to end just when the dynamic is getting going. Please continue.
Excellent story, though of course I wanting to read about blood family fucking. Certainly a creative way at telling a frequently seen story — well done!