All Comments on 'Walking on the Wild Side Ch. 01'

Great story. Watch this writer in the future!!!! The stories are just going to get better and better.

Powerone

I'm immediately a firm fan of Nikita, from this story, and eager to see any sequels. I like it all! The characterisations with room for development, the action, the pace of narrative, even the story length suits me just right.

After reading this story I was both delighted and dissapointed that there were no others... Please keep up the good word... I look forward to more "sub"missions

Skilled use of fast time-switches, tight construction of story and taut asses on display. The characters are well drafted and capable of development and deepening. The SM activity is not gratuitous, but functional to the story. The scenario is entirely belivable, as well as fucking hot. Nikita is to be congratulated on her maiden effort and I look forward with alacrity to further instalments.

Very high literary quality. Excellent pacing, character development, and story. It has a STORY...not the usual sex acts that talk of ball slamming sex acts, but heat and sex, and romance, and, well, look!!!

Keep it coming...please...with the crop

Excellent story from the word 'go.'

Wearing a collar and a leash...just the hook needed to reel them in.

This is one of the best hot reads on this site. Not only is it well written, but the characters drive the story, as it should be.

Great story and very well written.

...and very hot.

Loved, loved, this story.

Is this set back in the day or is it just the area they are in? Pocket protectors? Especially the Cigarettes held in rolled up sleeves! My grandfather and T.V. are the only reason I know that ever existed! Anyway, I love Cinder & Kymber's relationship. Beyond best friends, just below being sisters and almost lovers. <3