All Comments on 'What Happens in Spain Ch. 10'

Very nice addition, but you might want to do some more editing. Pretty much at the beginning then again a little later on, you used Maria's name when the name should have been Irene. Nit-picky, but I used to edit reports. Again though, I liked the story. Keep up the good work.

Anon - you were absolutely correct. I've edited, finding 5 instances where I had Maria when it should have been Irene, and one instance where I had Irene when it should have been Maria. Funny how we see what we want to see, not what we really have. Thanks so much for bringing this to my attention. (Also found one instance back of nixed up manes in Chapter 5, although nobody else has pointed out that one yet, I've edited and resubmitted.)

Irene was in for a real shock about the chance of pregnancy. All parties are to blame as Irene should have asked and so should have Maria and Albert. Oscar is totally out of the picture here. Now was Irene on Birth Control after that as they played with Maria and Albert again before she got to leave for the US? I don’t recall if Oscar was snipped like Ryan. The Toy Exchange between Tina and Irene was a Satisfying Success and both now want what the other has for their collection. I believe that Tina is craving a Large Thick cock now. I wonder what Ryan’s reaction will be when Irene mentions that she has been with Albert to satisfy her needs now that Ryan has made her a “Size Queen”. Thank You and looking forward to reading more of this Wonderful Hot Erotic Story. Now it’s what happens in the USA. 🇺🇸