All Comments on 'What Men Want Ch. 02'

I do believe that what you wrote is what most men dream of of experiencing!

I absolutely loved it. As I read this I found myself drifting back in time to when I was just out of High school and going to New York City and clubbing with a friend. I met a man alot like Joe and on that night he changed me from a small town little into a lust filled woman. You did a great job writing this.

JOAN @ The JERSEY SHORE

Same comments as chapter one, I love her psychology, I love that they are both...different, they are both...they aren't normal.

But, always with the mouth?

I think you know not just what men want, but also what women secretly wish for.

Your characterization is absolutely seductive. I look forward to seducing my husband tonight. :)

I'm still processing, but the end...it is my fantasy, my reality too at times Surburban mom/wife surprising a man with my "depths", the knoweldge of what men want, the sheer desire to give it to them! You've tapped my inner most deisires AGAIN! WELL DONE! So hot and devious, so innocent and dirty. Loved it!

could they meet up again? in a chance encounter She would make some hinting remark and Joe would remember what he did and how she still wanted more? I do enjoy reading how the girl is violated so much yet enjoys it. Still just a fantasy of mine to be used as a playthings but it gets me going every time :) thanks

This series was amazing. I'm sure we've all been there with the prick who takes advantage of a naive girl. I know I have. That hit a sore nerve for me. But this animalistic prick of a man obviously knew how to fuck the shit out of someone, and who doesn't want that? Why do the great attractive fuckers always have to be jerks? Anyway, thank you for this vigorous, very well written story. :)

Not only is this so well written as to look professional but the story is awesome, dirty and captivating. Well done I only wish she found someone to properly take care of her needs and claim her after. There must be many more Joe stories to tell of victimized teens? please share them. thanks

Very well written.

I've commented on this series before, but I have to say, this is still just as hot as it ever was. I read this story whenever I'm in the mood for a dirty, wrong, purely "lust-soaked" experience. This story really "grabs you by the balls" as they say, getting right to the point---right to the utter blunt perversion that is the male mind in its height of lust. Ok, maybe not just the MALE mind. I guess it is as much the female mind as the male, as the story recognizes. Your tale of the classic suave dirtbag seducing and raping an innocent and submissive virgin is sometimes what just hits the spot, no pun intended. Thank you for sharing your excellent literary prowess, and please write more!

afterward, I flipped my boyfriend over an kissed both his cheeks (I'm seriously into French). Then spread them. I whispered loudly enough for him to hear, and to feel my breath--asshole ... he whimpered, "Be gentle with me." I was. Until he wanted more.

The Fairy Pea

can be through his anus.

Believe me, you'll not only feel, but be, impowered.

But this isn't every female's wish--to be impowered. Butt you should know--you can be if you want it. And if he didn't love it, you wouldn't be impowered.

However, once he submits to you, there may be no going back. You won't think of him as dominant over you again, once you made him orgasm through his most sensitive hole. An he'll never really, or ever, feel he has power over you again.

Because he won't. But do you want to give up his power over you? Would this be fun? Or--you could switch places all the time. (You gotta let your imagination be supple, flexible--sp?--)

S/he gives pleasure--is in some way dominant.

All these stories about males forcing pleasure on females--it's the pleasure received that ties up your--like a magic spell.

fey one's little pea

This story was very hot. But that is not the reason for my comment. You have an amazing ability to create characters. MJ and Joe were exceptionally well thought out and realistic. The nervous girl and the angry retiree. Great job, please start writing again.

Excellent

i am speechless its the most realistic thing i ever read she was abused drugged and therefore that night was pleasurable instead of being complete agony .

it was her first time in all her holes that joe took so brutally from her and get away so easily

i guess there werent rape kit test that time also he never left any traces of semen in her vagina or ass

i really wish this doesnt happen to any virgin girl out there

the worst part she still craves it despite trauma and is unable to have a good marital life whereas joe always had the best of his days classic rapist and pedos always gets away

she is still like a victim never coming out of her trauma allthough i dont think most women would enjoy their anal virginity taken as rough as hers

many rape victims actually experience involuntary massive orgasm which they dont in real life maybe due to the pervasive,deparave and undeniabely exciting nature of rape

women feel more desired when they are lusted and preyed and manhandled especially if their rapist happen to be attractive or someone they secretly lust too

her idea was a vanilla one being so young and he simple wanted to break into all her holes for himself and thats it she is useless once he proudly took all her virginity to look for a new prey just as naive virgin as she was

honestly i cant understand how could he let her go she might turn him up ?

also how can one let go such a beautiful sub who has just given all 3 holes to you w/o songle complaint i wouldnt have let a beautiful naturally submissive to me but he did

maybe coz he is right about his attractive features and that he is really gud in bed he is never short of such innocent virgin girls and yes dont forget he drugs them and take each hole of them with no guilt just for a fun n8

he is quite good at saperating feelings and lust well almost all gud lukin men are they never fall for the women no matter how much the poor girl is ready to sacrifice but they are always greedy for more and never stops for one

this particular story changed my persoective of all the men gud ,bad same they all seem joe to me now

i know its wrong to paint the whole world with the same paint

but he himself days this is what a man truly wants

he doesnt want love he doesnt want companionship ,jeolousy ,possesiveness,belongingness,

clingyness,anxiety , care

no all he and all men want is to have a new sub virgin at their feet to be turn into mouth-pussy-anal fuck toy for the n8 with no shred of any guilt or concern towards her inability to adjust or digest such new level of primal animal lust and no regards to her tears or right to consent for her three fuckholes

her demand for gentle tender love left rendered

her pain her bruises ignored

with no promise of meeting again

he ll make sex with him so embarassing that you wont wanna dare to ask him out again w/o feeling getting even more degraded by the end

which is his successful strategy to avoid sleeping with same one and getting bored when theirs no novelty and looking for a new naive mj again to relive his adventure of being the first one to all her fuckholes within hours and no girl forgets her first time in any of the 3 holes ever and remembering him for all her 3 holes he is a lucky bastard to get away so easily w/o ever getting jailed

but if he is getting all men /he actually wants all the rauchy degrading humiliating sex every time with every new girls

why does he need something like coccaine why does he still feels empty if sex and sadism is all he needs

as for mj she is ruined like i say a girl never forgets her first time in all her holes especially if she orgasmed or has orgies

she will keep on looking for joe in her subcon will always remember him when she thinks about her first time whether she likes or not

any virgin girl initiated by rough sex like what mj got will definitely will keep on comparing all her other men and n8,s with what joe had given her

he knew he has carved himself not only her holes but deep in her heart and mind and since he ll never take her or she ll never come back for more she ll crave him forever

he knew mj will crave him forever

coz men like joe will get several mjs in the lifetme but women like mj will get only one joe the only joe

sad unsatisfying and forever haunting lust for mj

she wants him but cant go back no she cant ,cant even replace him too

hey jaymal

are you james marshall?

have you ever heard the date rape song by sublime it partially is very same

the only reason mary never complained and enjoyed it coz joe is an attractive guy

had joe been bald and ugly she would have pressed assault charge for sure

pretty girls like mary have a habit of being submissive to handsome rapist like joe

the only two relief that joe gave to mary was use lube while anal

and let her go alive

he told her his real name his address his profession and even after if she didnt turn him to cops to him it would mean she liked it

he is unrealistically confident about her being quite so it means he might have done it more girls

sex scenes were hot especially anal followed by deep throat

i know its yourr story but some scenes disturb me

like him mocking her that her dad would be ashamed of her to keep her quite

then not letting her use bathroom post sex and immediately rushed her to her home cant he be bit nice about it afterall she gave all 3of her cherries in one n8 to him

why did he kissed her in the end when her ordeal her feelings doesnt matter to him?

he calls himself a real man so why does he need drugs before sex?

and my biggest complain is that why did you potray mary jane as a completely innocent and pure virgin ? i mean why she has to be a virgin?why ruining her all first time in a one n8 stand?

dont you think it was a bit heartless/cruel move on joes part to take all of her first from her i mean what wrong has she done to joe to treat a virgin like a street whore ?

why does he need to humiliate a virgin girl for liking him?

it seems like a pedo is grooming ,luring ,brainwashing,raping and sodomising a child?

she has a mind of a 13 or 14 year old no knowledge about sex after all this was 1970s women used to be more into saving themselves for marriage.

was date rape drug available by 1970s?

and was one n8 stands in fashion by this time?

i know gud lukin men gets sex for free always he must have been a frat guy raping sorority chicks or a teen playboy duping virgins?

i mean doesnt he feel a bit of guilt?

are there more victims before her or after her that he is totally desensitised during rape?

the whole story both from rapist and victim pov sounds so real ,is it really a real story of someone you narrated i mean how are you able to catch both their feelings so detailed?i mean especially joes calculated moves both before and after rape?

we hear everyday in news that girls both virgin or non virgin gets raped or gangraped

i read daniella bound and degraded there you mentioned that real men dont like ragdolls or women w/o backbone so why does joe here wants a submissive mousy weakling like mary jane ?

and if he likes her so much why did he let her go? why not get het hooked ? its not everyday that men like joe would come across someone as beautiful gentle and submissive as mary ? he knew she liked him and her orgasm also stated that so why not mary jane and why lukin for new chick everyday ? why is he behaving like a teenager?

it seems like he transferred his divorce curse to her

maybe if her first time was with someone who loves her she wouldnt have been divorced and had a gud married satisfied life

Everyone once in a while on this site you find a story that seems almost written for you. Genuinely one of the most beautiful things I've ever read. Bravo

Outstanding