All Comments on 'What She Needs Ch. 05'

by kajira_girl

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GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
I love the way you are teasing us.

When David and Laura finally get there (and I can't believe you'd be so cruel as to keep them apart), it's going to light up the sky!

Foreplay. Yum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
im dying !

of anticipation!! i cant wait for them to get together . i hope the next chapter comes out quicker then this one ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good buildup

A very nice setting of the scene. Looking forward to when David and Laura hook-up. And I'm hoping Carey will be involved, too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Now I have to keep checking back every day...

To see if you posted the next chapter. Totally hooked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I want Jesse and Laura together!

Enough said.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
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Mmmmm

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