All Comments on 'When Elaine Met Amanda'

A prequel that invites a sequel of its own, very good reading stuff!

One of the very best. Well written. Look forward to follow on.

A very sweet story.

Excellent. Can only relish where this story will go.

A slow, simmering burn that pays off nicely. As someone who also contributes stories to Literotica, I appreciate the character set-up; we aren’t jumping right into the sex and the spanking. I also appreciate that your bio gives direction on where to begin Elaine’s story. I will be reading more of her adventures and I’m eager to learn where she is headed. Also, nice editing and grammar usage. That is not always the case on this site (although I know they try), If there is one thing that can take me out of a compelling tale quickly, it’s poor use of grammar, spelling and punctuation (I have found a few issues in mine after publishing and I always smack my forehead). If you have the time, please check out my page as your themes are similar to mine. Would love to get your thoughts on my work.