All Comments on 'Who Watches The Watchers Ch. 01'

I know he's only in the fertile imagination of WW, but damn I wish we had an Iron Crowbar and team in real life. And your not so subtle references to swamp frogs are always great. Derek B Harland, indeed. Lol. 5/5, but really, aren't you always a 5/5?

Jedd

The next chapter has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon. Level 4 patrons will get the cliffhanger answer tomorrow (5/5) at 7:00am.

And happy Star Wars Day! May the Fourth be with you!

I want sex in your stories. There's practically no sex in your new stories now.

Yes, it’s sometimes difficult to get sex written to my standard written into the mystery stories. But some of my future stories will have sex, especially the submissions for the 2022 Mickey Spillane Challenge. So have patience and stay tuned…

Great start and another cliffhanger ending.

The Swamp Frogs are certainly hopping on the merry-go-round trying to divert IC. Phyllis & Clarissa troubles are CIA connected.. Don’t know how yet connected.

*****Thanks for the read.