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by Many Feathers

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 14 years ago
Nice story

Now I know to stay away from women and wet towels. Another great story. I look forward to another one.

imurddyimurddyalmost 14 years ago
Great read!

I don't usually read the mom/son stories, but this one was fun. I'm more of a father/daughter reader, but this one had me hanging on the edge of the seat

RobertaDundeeRobertaDundeealmost 14 years ago
A 5, as always!

As soon as I saw 'Many feathers' as the author, I felt a sense of anticipation and excitement. Not quite as much as Danny, I must admit, but it was thoroughly justified. An excellent story, beautifully written and maintaining my opinion of the author as being one of the best short story writers out there. Well done and thank you again.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
very well put together story

A great story fast moving and really hot.

Thanks for the read

mrpervy46mrpervy46almost 14 years ago
YEAH

All fucking right, wow. Excellent story please more, more. I hope he marries them both.

venus_canvenus_canalmost 14 years ago
WoW!

That was nicely done ManyFeathers...

Seagull416Seagull416almost 14 years ago

Well done! I've enjoyed reading many of your stories. Keep up the outstanding work!

hongluobohongluoboalmost 14 years ago
another wonderful story

but it really could use a sequel with mom and kathy and 3 way family fun... i do hope this is planned.....

oliver1242oliver1242over 13 years ago
What does the future hold for this trio?

Great story. What will the future hold them? Write another chapter so we can find the out come for them. I have a feeling that there may be a pregnancy in the future with one or both women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
MORE

CONTINUE THIS STORY AND THEN ADD THE RELATIVES SO HE CAN GET THEM ALL PREGNANT EVEN THE COUSINS WIVES DAUGHTERS ETC LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
So yummy bad!

I have a very sexy mom, 4 sexy sisters, and 2 sexy daughters - not another male in the lot. I never have gotten to live out any of my fantasies, but you sure described some in this delightful story! Thank you! GG

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
a brilliant tale of family loving

enjoyed it from start to finish ans so glad he gets to fuck both his mother and sister....can see her getting pregnant soon possibly mommy too now that would be great.....and so glad he got rid of his fuck slut whore of a wife...worthless piece of shit - like they say - vice is nice but incest is best.....go for it there is no sex better....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I wish

Nearly every guys dream.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

"For the towel trick you pulled on Jack," I told her. She got my meaning, ever since he'd left, I had refused to call him dad. And then I told her...the rest of the story.

@@@ All I can think of is Paul Harvey, hehehe. Gotta remember the towel trick though! @@@

That's how sick and twisted I was. Even a simple conversation between us, didn't detract from the visions I sat enjoying about my own mother.l

@@@ Aww, come on, thats not sick and twisted, hell its fairly common. Now if you wanted to. Fuck a sheep on stage at a baptist convention, THAT would be sick and twisted! Hehe @@&

I finally rolled over between her legs, and then ran my tongue up her split.

@@@ Ive seen a couple of authors use that, split, I just cant get used to it though, it sounds odd to me... I prefer slit in that sentence i think... ...and I was actually surprised that he was interested in mom, thought it would be sis, though i bet it will include her soon, them looking alike and all! Wonder if shes gonna sneak in his room, playing mom, hehe @@@

And rarely, if ever, did she actually reciprocate the same for me

@@@ lol, now that sounds like my wife! ...actually pisses me off now that I think about it!! @@@

Never once had I ever come in her mouth, something that was simply unthinkable for her to do.

@@@ Well hell, she had to go anyway... Why did you marry her?! A dumb blonde that wont let you cum in her mouth? Thats a first, lol! Im kinda funny about that, if you want to cum in my mouth you damned well better expect me to cum in yours!! @@@

Shaven, which was a bit of a surprise as even Christy hadn't done that, preferring a 'landing strip,' as it was called, which I personally found silly.

@@@ Same here, shave it all off or trim it short... I prefer shaved off... Maybe its a natural male perversion, guys make excuses... Its just smoother, or I dont get hair in my teeth or any number of other excuses... The reality is its just a kinky perversion, having it schoolgirl smooth and cute. Heh. Id say twelve year old as an age to throw out there but these days puberty hits so much younger that they grow hair pretty young! Lol. @@@

How we managed it, I don't know, but we came together without words, without warning, just coming...spraying together.

@@@ lol, if I had a buck for every time two people cum together in stories, lol. You ever notice that not ONE story ever has the girl NOT cum during intercourse? Heh. Lots cant but you never see that! Guess it doesnt make for good writing, lol. @@@

With that, she sat up, pulling me up out of bed with her. "Now...help me strip the sheets off the bed!"

@@@ that could get old if she squirts all the time! Might have to invest in a liner for the mattress! Hehe @@@

Only then had Kathy seemingly pulled away, no longer sharing much if anything with me, her fears and concerns spoken of only once in a last ditch effort, and then after that...hardly a single word in concern or question. And certainly never again after that, anything about herself, or where she was in her life. That now...became private, secretive, unlike ever before.

@@@ She's in love with brother too?! @@@

Come on Danny, come here. Come take your sisters birthday cherry Danny. Wouldn't you like that? Wouldn't you like to stick your horny, hard cock inside your own sister's pussy? Take my cherry Danny? Please Danny please? Come fuck me for my birthday? Give me the only birthday present I really want from you?

@@@ Oooh yeah, got it bad for brother! Lol. Maybe he should mention this to mommy! She'd help sissy get what she wants most!! ;) @@@

When my orgasm began, it started in my toes...curling them, and they remained that way as the orgasm washed over me like a tidal wave. Not only did I see stars, I'm pretty sure I heard trumpets blowing somewhere off in the distance.

@@@ Rofl!! Too funny! While I like a blowjob, they really aren't that big of a deal to me. They feel good, but no matter how good the giver they just dont really do anything for me. I'd rather be fucking every time. @@@

It took superhuman effort even then for me to finally roll out of bed. Kissing her again, lingering as we did that, it took the opening of the front door to give me an energy boost as I hurriedly padded down the hall into my own room, and collapsed gratefully into my own bed. I was soon fast asleep.

@@@ I sure as hell dont get worn out and energy sucked from a blowjob, lol, kinda silly! If Im energy sucked its because I've been fucking for 45 minutes or longer and my arms and legs are giving out, lol. @@@

I really had to start locking my door, though that would only serve to no doubt raise suspicion anyway.

@@@ what, that you want left alone so you can jack off like everyone else in the house does? No big secret there, lol!! @@@

I expected her to turn, probably run screaming into the night, but she didn't.

@@@ ...and why would your grown-up sister act like a twelve year old and run off screaming? Hell she prolly wouldnt have when she was twelve, she prolly would have watched out of curiosity! @@@

"I'm your brother!" I said like that made any difference.

@@@ the absolute lamest, saddest most pathetic piece of hypocritical shit he could possibly spew out if his little incest ridden mouth!! @@@

There was no fucking way. I finally slid out of bed, standing up, no longer shy or concerned about her seeing me, after all...she'd already seen enough as it was. "You need to leave," I said sternly, seeing the shocked, hurt look on her face after having said that. She burst into tears, turned, and then opened the door, racing down the hallway back to her room where I heard her open it, and then slam it seconds later.

@@@ God, what a worthless piece of shit for a human being. Why do authors always write the guys in as fucking losers? 99% of the time in these stories! @@@

Against my better judgment, and all reasoning, I slid my underwear back down my legs. "Just this Kathy! I mean it, nothing else."

@@@ still a huge wanking loser! @@@

And then the guilt set it. Maybe I really was a twisted pervert, even more so than my sister. A reminder that Kathy could never ever find out about mom and me

@@@ ...and the odds of ever pulling that off are..... Zero! @@@

Having at least climaxed, I was thinking a bit more clearly at least. "For one...I'm spent. And for two...you promised Kathy, nothing else...remember?" She was pouting, as she tore off a slice of pizza, handing me one.

@@@ gawd youre such a dick! Youre gonna hurt her twice as much when she does find out! @@@

I knew that if Kathy ever found out, it was apt to destroy her, destroy this family.

@@@ only because youre a lying sack of shit that treated her like shit! @@@

"Oh fuck...Kath! Kath!" I cried out as the surge of sweet ecstasy began racing up my cock. She leaned over, engulfing me with her mouth, and began draining me as I poured myself out...and into her.

"No! No! Nooooooooooooo!" I cried out. But it was already too fucking late.

@@@. Gawd, he is such a huge pussy! And an asshole! Pulling away just as he starts her orgasm! Fucking cruel! Thats like letting go of your dick just as soon as you start to cum.

She goes down on you and youre yelling no?! Moron! @@@

@@@ I'll take a coffee break here to, again, bitch about the guy being written in as a total wanker! Fuck its frustrating and annoying seeing the brothers and dads written in like that over and over again!! @@@

"Oh I'm not worried, just curious. She seems to be running around the house with the same look of contentment on her face, that I have on mine these days!" Mom said reaching down, giving my groin a familiar little squeeze. "And speaking of which...one way or the other, tonight...even if we have to go outside to do it, you're fucking me come hell or high water!"

@@@ Rule number One: You cant fool mom, besides she usually already knows ;). ...just remember dickhead, she gave you a chance to come clean! Hah! @@@

Yeah, but not here...not now, it's late. She could hear us, or...or come looking for us or something," I stammered not making any sense.

@@@ yeah, moms gonna get up in the middle of the night, come down to your room and look for you "hey son, I know its 12:30, but I was thinking, ya know since this cant wait till the morning, but would you stop at the grocery on the wsy home and pick up some steaks? Oh, btw, why is your sister sucking your cock?" Riiiight. @@@

"Oh Danny...Danny, for so long, for so very, very long...I've wanted to feel this, feel you Danny...feel you inside me. And now...I am! Oh God! I finally am!"

@@@ well maybe, just maybe, he'll be less of a dick. @@@

"What? You actually thought I was going to hit you with this?"

"Well...yeah!"

"I probably should have...and would have too, if I'd had this in my hand when I first came in here. But...after your sister and I talked, after she told me everything...and I do mean, everything. Well...I knew then, this wasn't entirely your fault, any more than it was your sisters...or mine. We're all to blame here for what's happened. You seriously didn't think I could be hypocritical myself now do you?"

@@@ No fucking way I would have spread my legs anyway. Fuck. That. Lol. @@@

....and while he gets the happy ending, somehow I just dont think he deserves it, lol.

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 8 years ago
Oh my!

A great story! Thank you!

lonelypappalonelypappaalmost 7 years ago
WOW GREAT STORY

DAM THIS GUY HAD IT MADE......MOTHER AND SISTER........GOOD FOR HIM....LOL

goducks1goducks1almost 6 years ago
liked the sex and the tease!

this is a well-written short story. Good dialogue, great sex with mom, good tease and then sex with sister. Terrific. great read. 5 stars!!

linnearlinnearover 5 years ago
Love it

Really enjoyed this one. I just wish I knew why so many authors just disappear from the website, I really have like everyone of the stories.

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearalmost 5 years ago
just a nice story

A little too far fetched and the boy was/is a complete pussy. So, I can't say it was good, but I can't say it was bad either so it was just a nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nice story mostly

What struck me was son/brother was such a WIMP! Shaved pussy? Why would a woman want to look like a six year old? YUK!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
the best of all

Comparing with other incest stories, this is the best one. Some of the others are somewhat nice. This needs at least another short chapter including both three of them move out and definitely the pregnant part must include. And Happy 2 Wife, Happy Life.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 2 years ago

Oh my, i had 3 sisters, i surely would have gone to hell.

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 2 years ago

Hey, is there a part two "Aunt Beth and cousin Janice come to visit again."? Or how about bringing Christy back as the submissive slut of the family? Let's start a harem. This could be a Hot (and very funny) series. 5 stars from me. (10/23/2021) Oh, and this goes on my favorites list.

ToughSailorToughSailor5 months ago

OK. Good story as far as it goes. NOW that you've set the stage for at least a threesome between the principle protagonists let's get on with chapter 2 . . . .

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