All Comments on 'Why Stop at Cancun Ch. 04'

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peggytwittypeggytwittyabout 18 years ago
very vivid story

Good writing but not enough story to let excitement really build. Please make your chapters a little longer. Still feeding my mind with great erotic pictures.

Thank you

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