All Comments on 'WIFE, SIL, MIL Pt. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
HMMMMM

THE STORY LINE IS GOOD, IT RATED FIVE STARS,BUT YOU ONLY RECEIVED THREE DO TO THE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS. THESE MADE IT DIFFICULT TO READ AT TIMES. PLEASE HAVE SOMEONE PROOFREAD YOUR STORIES PRIOR TO SUBMISSION.

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