All Comments on 'Willing to Learn Ch. 03'

Great story!!! She had it coming!!!! It was well written. Please, write some more chapters. I can't wait to read more!!! More women should learn their place in life, eh? It is only fiction, but hey, it is well done fiction!!! About the negative comments I read before this, just ignore them. Some people have a hard time understanding the difference between reality and fiction/fantasy. It's their problem, not yours!!! Please, keep up the great writing!!!!!

Not exactly the kind of stories i normally read but it was pretty good. keep it up. ;) as for the negative post ignore her, she just doesn't know what she's talkin bout.

This story held my interest and i'm usually VERY easy to get bored. you did a good job at removing any kind of narrative tone from the story. I actually could believe that these were really a husband and wife's activities from a character point of view. I didnt feel like i was reading someone's fantasy. It felt like just Very good writing. keep up the good work :) and btw-- i am a wife so some us females do indeed see that this is indeed just good writing -- please write another installment-- cant leave us hanging like this -- what happens with the paramedics.... ;-)

I know this was the ending, but do Cal and Diane get back together since she has finished her ordeal?

the ending, stuck bottle , rescue squad etc'

demands at least a sequel

maybe more than 1,

for instance where Diane turns the tables & in some way gets her revenge on bren & co.

Has she not heard of a debt relief order lol this was just a way for her husband to get back with his ex an have a whore for an income he never wanted to stay with his wife obviously