All Comments on 'Women of My Family Ch. 01'

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MafenMafenalmost 3 years ago

Your parents had a window into the bedroom from INSIDE the house?

'dint' does not mean 'did not'; 'didn't ' does.

Frankly, this reads like it was written by a virgin.

readstories1989readstories1989almost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the English lesson. I hope you do understand what is meant by fiction and fantasy though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very good story. real feelings and emotions. will be looking for part 2

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGabout 1 year ago

Mafen (comment from 1 year ago)...is an IDIOT! Leave the author alone; the story is excellent as is, and obviously the author has 'some issue's...which just make the tale more endearing...

Five**5**Stars, for a well-thought-out tale, and as a starter for the next parts...which is where I am going now!!🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯⚑⚑⚑⚑⚑

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