All Comments on 'Wood in the Woods'

A good first story. It would be a shame if this didn't have a follow up of Katie railing her boy toy up against a tree.

more please....:)

make another part of this story, it was amazing

It's missing quite a bit in terms of physical description, a proper delineation of their developing feelings during the encounter, and and James' insecurities about what he's doing.

There was little to no development. It was just an instantaneous "I like shemales" transformation. It would have been better if he put up more of a fight with us seeing them use their mutual leverage against each other. And a blow job might get him slightly interested based on the physical contact and her reaction to him, but it's contrived to say it would convert him. She should have forced herself on him completely if you wanted that to fit.

Enjoyable, but way too bare bones for your purposes.

would be nice to see some more.

THAT WAS REALLY HOT!! I NEVER SUCKED A DICK BEFORE but I THINK I,D LIKE THAT HOT!!!!

You have a little skill, but it needs to be stretched out a little more... I like where you are going with this, but it needs to be slowed down a little. Tell us what you are feeling, how it feels to you, and why you are feeling it... we (as the reader) need to 'become' you for a brief moment in time... it's a great story, just let us see what you are seeing... I'm sure that everyone else here would like to see Katie's cock. tell us MORE!

Makes me wish I could have caught the both of you in the woods, then been "forced" to suck off both of you. It's been a few years since I've had a dick in my mouth, but would really like to do that again. My wife uses a strap-on up my ass, but I'm looking for a shemale friend. How fantastic to have a nice a feminine face, no adams apple, a nice pair of breasts, and about 8" of dick to please.

title says it, but WOW! loved it.

Please make more I loved it

I loved the story it was fantastic, but it was so short I didnt want it to end!

Please make more of those two!

More please!

I can' t wait continuing. Please keep writting. Thanx.

Good set up but a little back story and some pacing could make a great story better.

would you suck a transsexuals' cock if the occasion arose?

I myself would most likely stroke that cock...

Not sure if I would suck it...

I love reading these type of stories and picture myself in that situation and how much i would enjoy it.

Great read

Liked it,why didn't you continue?

very good, please continue.. I am not agressive and do love to dress nicely so I would probably end up being Katie's girlfriend.. and oh yes, licking sucking and being fucked senseless since I am so hot for her.. a lesbian couple

you should write a second part to this story

Just love this story i want to know what happens next

Love the encounter. So glad it turned sweet toward the end. Thanks for crafting it!

Great story.

that would happen to me, and she would post the pix on the web

Great sexy story beautifully told. Thank you. I’d love a sequel?

Loved the story. Wish something like that would happen to me, but I guess I’ve gotten a bit to old. 😩

Lucky guy!