All Comments on 'Writer's Block'

Thank you!

A story about spouses, fucking each other, with love and enthusiasm. Thanks for the change.

More sex in this than all the others combined. Fun.

This was the first story that was just about sex. Nothing more. Nothing less. A husband and wife enjoying each other. Well played but probably the easiest way to get to 750 words. Just add a little nipple or squeeze a little butt and the words pile up. Nicely done.

It is an old Chicago song called 15 or 6 to four. The group had one more song to write to complete their album. They had to do it in a hurry. They had no idea how to get another song going. They had been up all night trying to come up with an idea. They were beat. Someone wondering how long they had been at it asked what time it was. The answer....Twenty five or six to four (am). And the song was written. My compliments.

The rough, unpolished start had me cringing a bit. Delightfully surprised that only turned out to be a meta-story.

Maybe you should write a story in 750 words rather than write 750 words about trying to write a story in 750 words. I am sure this came across to you as clever but it was too clever by half. Less meta is beta.

At the start his cock was sucked, then his wife walked in. So, who sucked his cock. You never stated who asked and then did it.

Poor story choice.

Hot loving sex between old married folks. That may not be the sexyist, but she became his muse, and helped him with the idea for his 750 word story. I really liked it, Five Stars worth.

One commenter asked "who sucked his cock"? Obviously, that was all he had written for the start of writing his story. At least it was obvious to me.

Sorry if the beginning was unclear, that iffy dialogue was suppose to be the story that Matthew was writing. It's stilted and bad because he's not use to writing short stories and was just pissing around. It has no connection to the main storyline other than to set up the meta-narrative.

You should have made it easy to know. We are not mind readers. You could even try using italics for parts not in the story, or better yet not include things not part of the story. Oh that was just me thinking aloud and not part of what I was saying.

I loved it, it made sense.

I'm married to a writer. The support, patience and love came through.

I hope it's true.

Nice story. If I could get that kind of support I might finish some stories.