All Comments on 'Young Bride's First Cheat: My Brother'

attitude.........and braindead

I just don't want one for a wife, but thats just me. Good luck.

Brain dead. Both the writer and the characters in the story.

but cant say it was totally bad either

any man or woman who would or does think this way is mentally disturbed

Constructively - Its your mind and the sick material from there thats draging the scores down dontcha cee. <P>

And it's more than you deserve.

Hmmm, desire low scores and rude comments? In that case - well done & mission accomplished.

By imagine13

... evidently you don't read english...she stated that is was done before you dickwad.

The sex is SUPERHOT and dripping JUICY. So I give a 4 Rating. But the bad grammar, wrong spellings, and mistaken usages are maddening. And I am not thrilled by the exploits of a three-alarm, utterly immoral whore, thank you.

The original version has long been a favorite, so it's great to see this update! Very hot!

Very fine story could have more description of sex scenes. Read the pre bachalor party and can't wait for the next part. Hope it has more sex dp and gangbang it seems that this women can't get enough from her husband and her brother in law. Hurry with next part.6

Loved it! Long erotic build up through the exhibitionism to the finale. Keep going, would love to see more stories!

Loved the story. When will we see the Bachelor Party story. Looking forward to it. Don't mind the other critics, they don't know a good story when the see it. So please write the Bachelor Party story. You left us hanging with the last story so finish the series.

This story is awesome! Like that she's not cheating, nor is he a weakly cuckold - just plain old sexual tension with three people.

Thumbs up!

Id love to hear more....

perhaps a swinging hottub party with a certain old friend.

.....who'll be getting her skanky pussy---every guy they know, and every guy they meet in the future. The other question, who'll get her heart? We also already know that one-- his brother. Doug's already owns her heart AND her pussy. Her husband is only kept in her life to financially support her and Doug's babies. And "husband" will be her human dido "place-holder" between her real love-making and fucking times.with all her more important men. Well, her husband serves another usefull purpose-- he keeps her wearing his ring so she doesn't marry and make an absolute fool of some other, actually undeserving, guy.

where the wife is nothing more than a whore fucking whomever she pleases, along with the goofy, moron husband, until she passes along to him every STD known to exist.

So you hate these types of stories do you dear annony? Then tell us please, PLEASE!!!!!! WTF do you read them? You're just a brain dead asshole like we all know you are.

Loved the story, my wife and i did a similar thing when we had only been married six months with my nephew. We would take turns fucking her every Saturday night and my wife would suck him off several times on Sundays. This all went on for months. We have now been married fifty nine years and this story brought it all back,beautiful.

Crazy about it. So sexy and erotic and oh so nasty, (that's the best part). Brothers having a party on one's wife, maybe even knocking her up. So Hot and oh so much enjoyed. She was a sexy little tart for all of them. I think her and her hubby and his brother will be having lots more fun with her. Oh yeah, write about it so I can enjoy reading of it. Loved it a bunch!

Hot! Hoping for more!!!