All Comments on 'Young Neighbour's Bliss'

Although the story can be understood, the grammar and sentence structure in this story are horrific! Was this even proofread before publishing? The use of the English language doesn't even fit in some places.

There were at least a dozen errors in grammar and punctuation in the first paragraph alone. I did not bother to read any further than that.

... but your grammar and lack of punctuation was a major distraction. Get a proof-reader to help you with your next effort.

The story was still a good read. I enjoyed it . Thanks for sharing.