All Comments on 'Yukiko'

The summary of the story on the 'new stories' list says the girl is Chinese. 'Yukiko' is a Japanese name. She has an

'Uncle Wong', which is Chinese. Perhaps she had a Chinese father and a Japanese mother, the mother having named her?

I'm not sure if in that part of the world, ethnicity follows the mother, as it does in many other parts of the world.

Excellent first story. I'd love to read more of Yukiko's sexual escapades.

Great first story G-String. If you need participants for future stories you are more than welcome to email me. I travel througb Asia regularialy on business.

Jesus...that just killed the entire goddamn story for me. You didn't pay attention to detail. Japanese..Chinese...Big difference.

Who were those two dumbasses who tried to stir up a fuss about ethnicities? Did they bother to read the story, or were they so thick in the head that they didn't know the choice of a Japanese name by our Chinese heroine was deliberate? This story was super hot! Top marks!

Ni hao mah

Yo8ur first story is fabulous. I have seldom been so roused.

More!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now can we see some of your pictures in an illustrated story

Also, whuy not read one onm audio like sexykitten

Good luck

I thought this was a great story! However, the complainers about the name obviously didn't read it all... too busy fingering your pussies or jacking off, huh? :)

good debut....

Lucky me, I was playing story spinner and came upon your story. Poor girl couldn't catch a break. I would love if you continued it to see how it all played out. Keep writing

Thrilling adventure. Very appealing heroine, believable character. A sequel would be appropriate, I think, showing further humiliating but exciting adventures and eventual triumph and redemption. An occasional spelling mistake and incorrect grammar and substitutions of words which reminded me that I was reading a story rather than being there brought down my rating from four to three stars. Keep writing!

Excellent blend of erotic theme with just the right tough of sexual humiliation. Good main character development.

she pissed some one off. Is hari kari in her future. TK U MLJ LV NV PS I HAVE READ ALL 6 OF YOUR SUBMISSIONS

Interesting blend of traditional values, humiliation and romance... although we are getting insight into her, do we really know her? Curious to learn more.

That young lady from HK got a lot more than she bargained for when she decided to bare her breasts and then her lustful and exhibitionist nature took over. it was a slippery slope and she went running and falling down it. You did a fabulous job writing your story in English - absolutely no apologies are needed. You write better than many native speakers of English. I've been to Bali many times and I can understand Yukiko's desire to try something new there. With so many women there topless, it's natural to want to join them. And you are also right about Indonesian men preying on them. Sometimes things start with a massage at the beach and things go from there. Bali, with its Hindu and animist roots and rituals, has a strange affect on people. Well-done!

Not being computer literate, how did the ex-boyfriend put all that info on the web?

The Bastard didn't put the info on the web. Rather, he stumbled across the pix on some voyeur websites, downloaded them and email them to annoy Yukiko and then forwarded the same to her office for viewing by her colleagues.

Anyway, this part was fictional while the nerve wrecking part of being topless in just a skimpy pair of cotton knickers on a Bali beach wasn't!

Thank you all for reading and leaving comments.

This is one of my favourite stories, simple and hot, but I have to say that I completely hate the ending. The odds of the ex finding content of her online, there's just so much content uploaded daily!

The story wasn't really about humiliation, so I don't know why you'd make it about it at the very end. It was about overcoming her shyness and fears, it would have been a better ending if he was begging to have her back, and she was empowered to say no from her new found confidence. Also it would have been hot if she kept the shirt.