All Comments on 'Zamindars Pt. 01: Sexual Depravity'

by prithvik1947

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Why would you even write this?

Many Thakurs were probably depraved, but I know of no situation where such camaraderie existed between father and son, especially in the 90’s.

Castist misogyny disguised as fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
This is just disgusting and sad

- and also very infuriating!!!

As a male and human being I really do wonder what's going on -- or not -- in your head. This portrayed feeling of class superiority, of 'ownership' of other people -- of their minds and bodies, of sadistic pleasure of denigrating other human beings and violating their dignity -- of treating them like objects, like garbage --, is just part of a century old sad story of patriarchy and social and economic structural violence and oppression -- combined with a lack of human empathy.

If there's any arousal connected to this story, it's not sexual, but political. The kind of social and sexual relations you describe and apparently identify with, is something thousands and thousands of people bravely and desperately have given their lives to combat.

Even though you position yourself / the story nearly a generation ago, telling it now in 2019 I would myself feel so extremely ashamed of connecting to it.

So please stop here, no more chapters needed. You should rather delete the one already posted, (and which anyhow belongs better in the NonConsent category), because it stinks.

Akelbee

LJJLLJJLalmost 5 years ago

Absolute bullshit

Was this supposed to be erotic? All i feel is pissed off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Disgusting!!

Disgusting!!! please stop writing SHIT like this!!.... or maybe your were born this way!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Superb Beginning

I liked your story a lot. Pls continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Bull shit

Stop writing such shitty stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
yuck

Absolutely yuck !!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Continue the story please. It's something new.

prithvik1947prithvik1947almost 5 years agoAuthor
Part 2 coming soon

I have submitted Part 2 of the story for publishing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
What is the value

... of putting the english between brackets? Just skip the hindi, it’s jarring as hell.

Sunit13Sunit13almost 5 years ago
Good one

Nice so far.. five stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Waiting for part 5

Waiting for part 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So funny cud resist laughing

shirereeveshirereeveover 1 year ago

"This is just disgusting and sad - and also very infuriating!!!"

This style of story is not my cup of tea either but could we just leave the "progressive" politics aside for a moment? Patriarchy, structural violence, oppression ... it's all gag-inducing. I think I know what pronouns "Anonymous" uses. Maybe "they" should be reading in another, more appropriate category ....

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Nice feeling will go away

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