I just have to say how freaking incredible this story is! I mean we are talking about two bollywood heroines, a twist that blows minds, and some seriously steamy sexy scenes. And the best part? You, as a Muslim woman, fearlessly took on this steamy and daring story, exploring unchartered territories/genres like a boss! Your courage in delving into taboo subjects and challenging norms is nothing short of heroic. It's writers like you who are breaking barriers and proving that creativity knows no boundaries. You've got excellent storytelling skills bringing these characters of Rakhi and Mallika to life in a way that's both sizzling hot and emotionally resonant. And that twist of Rakhi being a she-male, سبحان اللہ , it added a whole new level of excitement and hotness! While reading, I felt it was me instead of Mallika Sherawat, experiencing those intense and hot moments, step by step, with Rakhi and her lund. The story really sparked my curiosity and I find myseld intrigued by the idea of the she-males and open to the pssibility of sex, if the opportunity arises.
ग़ज़ब का imagination है नज़मा आपका। बोहत ही मुख्तलिफ़ और मज़ेदार कहानी लिखी है… बेहद मज़ा आया। मैंने पोर्न वीडियो तो कई देखी है शी-मेल से ताल्लुक़ लेकिन देसी कहानी इस concept पर पहली दफ़ा पढ़ी।
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Fine but a bit spanking too ...
very nice start
நிச்சயம் வித்தியாசமான கதையாக இருக்கும்
பாகம் இரண்டை ஆவலுடன் எதிர்பார்க்கிறேன்
ithuvarai varaatha concept
சீக்கிரம் அடுத்த பாகம் வரும் என எதிர்பார்ப்புடன்
السلام علیکم Najma,
I just have to say how freaking incredible this story is! I mean we are talking about two bollywood heroines, a twist that blows minds, and some seriously steamy sexy scenes. And the best part? You, as a Muslim woman, fearlessly took on this steamy and daring story, exploring unchartered territories/genres like a boss! Your courage in delving into taboo subjects and challenging norms is nothing short of heroic. It's writers like you who are breaking barriers and proving that creativity knows no boundaries. You've got excellent storytelling skills bringing these characters of Rakhi and Mallika to life in a way that's both sizzling hot and emotionally resonant. And that twist of Rakhi being a she-male, سبحان اللہ , it added a whole new level of excitement and hotness! While reading, I felt it was me instead of Mallika Sherawat, experiencing those intense and hot moments, step by step, with Rakhi and her lund. The story really sparked my curiosity and I find myseld intrigued by the idea of the she-males and open to the pssibility of sex, if the opportunity arises.
Nazma ji… bahut hi maadak story hai… iske aage bhi to likhiye… kuchh aur heroine aur celebrities ko involve kariye
who's next
ग़ज़ब का imagination है नज़मा आपका। बोहत ही मुख्तलिफ़ और मज़ेदार कहानी लिखी है… बेहद मज़ा आया। मैंने पोर्न वीडियो तो कई देखी है शी-मेल से ताल्लुक़ लेकिन देसी कहानी इस concept पर पहली दफ़ा पढ़ी।
लाजवाब… ज़बरदस्त…. बहुत ही मस्त कहानी लिखी है नज़मा जी आपने…. थोड़ा अपने बारे में भी बताये..,
Awesome. Very hot
बेहतरीन कहानी है… हट के है… मज़ा आ गया
स्टोरी का स्टार्टिंग इतना लम्बा नहीं होना चाहिए। पत्रों का परिचय संक्षेप में दे कर आगे बढ़ने से कहानी और भी सुंदर लगती।
good
Unique
Unique but very hot story
Kya kahani hai mast kahani asi kahani Maine Kabhi Nahi suni mast kahani hai
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Thank you so much! Still working on the next part.