by aamirhydkhan
story bohot slow cahlti hai. details bhi bohot lambi ho jane ke vajah se "Story Magic" kam ho jayega. sirf 1 chapter- 1 page post kar rahe ho...
please, ek chapter 3-4 page ka hona chahiye !!!
Its slowest ever posted and with so many parts !!!
please post more paragraphs in each chapters. Site add more pages automatically.