All Comments on 'A Night Out Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Huh?

I get the need to drug her in order to get her into the cabin but the chloroform seems lazily redundant. Even the gag makes no sense when she's been not only completely secured, but the room was soundproof and in the middle of nowhere. Why couldn't he simply start making her comply to his demands by locking her up alone, leaving her feeling helpless. That way she'd soon realize she's totally dependent upon him for everything and completely at his mercy. To me being unconscious is a blessing to a victim. The way it ended with him jacking off as she drifted off makes him look pathetic as if he can't deal with her awake.

robbroyalrobbroyalover 3 years ago
Love It!

Really, REALLY good story. Makes me think of all the hot girls I know with nearly irresistible feet.

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