All Comments on 'Amateur Photographer Ch. 05'

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Mr_WebgirlMr_Webgirlalmost 18 years ago
I love it.

Its a great story but I'm starting to miss Sara. I'm surprised no one else has left a comment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great

Very good, as are all yours

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Bring back Sarah!

Wow, amazing story, it flowed very smoothly. The only real flaw so to speak, would be the lack of actual penetration- but thats only the "pervert" side of me speaking :P. In addition, while Kate had her own appeal, I prefered Sarah- she doesn't scare me! I was rather saddened to see she never returned.

tafxkztafxkzalmost 15 years ago
Hoping to meet Sarah in the next on

nice very nice, now where is Sarah

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What can I say, other than I am really just your average warm-hearted nice guy. I do have an active imagination, and sometimes stories spring from it - some of which are on here. I think the old cliche 'sex is all in the mind' has a literal truth to it (otherwise these chat ro...

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