All Comments on 'Amy Comes For The Weekend'

That was a great story, very hot! I hope (expect) to read more about these threee in the very near future!

Another chapter or two would be very much appreciated. Superb story and very hot. Looking forward to more.

Very well written and well thought out. Yeah, I identified with Julies Dad!! I could deal with that now. And I'd be just like him, trying to get more and more of that sweet Asian/Scott pussy!!!

Please write more as I want to read about Julie and Amy doing a 69 for Daddy!! And maybe Daddy doing Julie too!!

that would be so good!!

I can't wait for more chapters. Well written! Keep it cummin'!

Now that is a Hot story..

keep em coming please..

A cabernet with spaghetti and chicken balls! You've just defiled the minds of every oenophile who reads your story. LOL

Hi. The plot ane execution of the story are wonderful and I give you top marks for that. However, as a sometime LIT editor, you made a mistake at the beginning of the story. You changed tenses.

You started with "Amy is" and if we're viewing the action or being told about it, it should always be PAST tense - "Amy was". It may sound odd, but it is preferable.

Oh - few spelling mistakes. "Lightning" is the storm.

But otherwise, very good work.

Great detail, wonderful story telling, can't wait to read a sequel.

Great story.

What guy wouldn't want a beautiful Japanese girl snuggled up to him and willing to be fucked often.