All Comments on 'Blindsided Ch. 02'

And the creeps get their tender feeling hurt

Too bad---So sad

I read a couple of your other stories and they are not bad, nor are they great, but this is definitely not one of your best. Three women humiliating a guy is a good idea but the direction you chose was wrong. Don't give up but learn from the negative feedback I am sure you will get.

I was wrong, it was three women and one pansy. There was nothing wrong with the hero? settling in long term with the girl; but the way you have this written I was surprised Tim did not stay for more sex with your hero.

If you write a pansy character you need to take out the word rape and make him? grateful for sex with anything.

It is hard to think of a male character who would go through rape, bondage and spankings to say thanks do it again. Oh well I had him tie one of the superior women characters down a few years later. English sub boy with has stories if you need examples of a sub almost male character.

I like this story alot !

Pay no attention to your spelling-challenged critics. I don't understand why they take the time to comment on a story if they hate it so much. Personally, I loved your story and I hope to see more of your work posted. Sigh--when are we going to get a "creampie" catagory all our own??

why do you bring in that stupind M/m stuff? And what guy would ever mary a bitch like that? Please endings like this simply destroy any believability of the story? Not that it had much I mean he could have freed himself pretty often and didn't which is simply unrealistic.

No respect. Besides which he would have booted them all at the beginning, rendering all the rest of this dumb story mute. Marry her? What a joke.

Good story, crappy ending.

I Love eating yummy Cum from my wife's twat and would really love to suck the cum straight from her boyfriends cock!!

Nope. He should have escaped. Then systematically suppressed each one separately and done to them what they did at the start. Then with Suzy he would tell her that there is no way he could ever be with her or even care about her. That seems to be the only way forward.

Sorry guys anyway you sugar coat it was rape.

And to let it continue, marrying one of the rapists?

Possibly plausible in a very warped world.