All Comments on 'Depraved Green Card Arrangement'

Then I got to the word "Rupa." I instantly knew where this was going. Yuck.

Pleas throw away your computer and anything els you can use to submit stories. We don't need a repeat.

In the interest of hapless readers give up this compulsion to write. It will be a favour to yourself as well.

Did my good buddy Dunkie write this baby bump fantasy?

What is it with dumping on India? These characters look like complete fools. Nothing fun about this mess.

1 star

I thought your story was nicely depraved. Erotica is better when it's twisted. I pity the fools who don't understand that. I can see our narrator going full cickold within the first year and losing the wife or at least her respect. He's going to end up on the old guy's cock, for sure.

So keep on telling about husbands death spiral!

R.

Please continue. The people who make rude comments do not understand the thrill of knowing your wife is making other men cum in her. I would ask to watch from time to time. I loved being a cuck because Then I got to watch my wife have full mind blowing organism. If a man loves his wife he lives for her and wants her to have great sex, Kisses Honey

PEOPLE WITH A HIGHER THAN THIRD GRADE EDUCATION SHOULD KNOW THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN WOMEN AND WOMAN. In the sentence SHE WAS A WOMEN. You sound stupid

Just missing a follow up part 2

He needs to share her with his friends when they visit. Have her wear sexy saris showing her belly and worn low. Low cut tops so you can see her tits making her bend over and serve everyone like a good wife should. Except everyone will know she used to belong to you and now she’s a whore for him. To prove it she will go into the bedroom and one at a time the men will go back and everyone can listen as she’s fucked.

Certainly your set up is good. Looking forward to how you develop your story.

I am impatiently waiting the next chapters

Excellent storyline. Take it further please which ever way you like.

His face was flustered. The author's face should be flustered in embarrassment from posting this.

Please write the continuation of this story

@26thNC....it’s YOU that should be embarrassed for being the biggest dickhead on this site. And while it might not be a great story, it’s ten times better than anything you have ever written. Oh wait, that’s right, all you can write is lame comments, you haven’t written a damn thing.

nothing wrong if its win win situation, i wud enjoyed both his wealth and sex.... ushashinechennai