by kaypee
not good. writing coality is so bad. fathers charecter is so so disgusting. golpota jevabe lekha hoyeche motei valo noi.
I Disagree from the above comment , contrarily i found tour story to be much better than the crap which other indian stories are . Awaiting your last part !
This is one hell of a hot Indian story i have ever read! Keep it going! Its a crime not to continue!
I was initiated into sex at the age of 17 by a 36 year old neighbor lady whose husband worked in the gulf. keep writing please.
Why does everything end up with a pregnancy? What happened to just sex for fun?