All Comments on 'Deviant Durga Puja Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
average

this time u bring something hot but grammer lebel is difficult in some passage. kichu jaigate grammer ektu kothin hoye geche. arekta bishoy hocche golpe kichu bistarito bornona proyojon chilo jemon ma er shorirer nognota ebong puro nogno deher bornona. future e obosshoi ei bishoy gulo kheyal rakhbe.

laurensi88laurensi88over 12 years ago
NICE!

Thanks for the story!

regards.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice story , from ans_2@rediffmail.com

such a nice story all things happend in story only never ever had sex so far looking for girls to have sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Dull..

pretty dull story. no proper display in art of sex in writings. beside that you have to keep in mind the cultural difference. pay more attention on the erotic-ity of the story .

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