All Comments on 'Football Sunday with the Slut'

Great story. I am sure that is every high school teachers fantasy. Nice setup for chapter 2. I can't wait.

I'm sorry, the idea of parents and teachers gang-raping a teenage girl is not my idea of erotica. I wish you luck with your next submission and let's hope that you take your writing up to a more exhalted plateau.

If something isn't your thing, then don't bother commenting/scoring.

watchingyou2: Your writing is pretty good, nice work.

Wrong category, should've been posted to Nonconsentual. As one commenter said, "tacky". I have to agree.

WE (being my dad and i) READ YOUR STOREY, WE THINK THE OTHER COMMENTS DONT MATTER WE LOVED YOUR STOREY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I AM MY DADDYS SLUT TOO. AND IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU WROTE ABOUT DADDY AND I DURING OUR SUPER BOWL PARTY. THIS YEAR. I WAS DADS FRIENDS ENTERTAINMENT.KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING.

Dear Author,

Your writing is hot, it makes me hot, it makes a lot of men and women hot. Please keep writing and ignore those most ignorant, sour people who read your story and then bash it. Probably no-one listens to their boring banter in their real life. I am 99% sure that YOU know the difference between fantasy and real life, contrary to the silly zero voters. To them I say: Get a life.

Best wishes,

J (I'm a woman, by the way)

That was fucking HOT, I loved it. My clit is on FIRE.

Your stories are hot. Let me be the first to comment. you are now one of my favorites. Please keep it coming.

Thanks from miss Silver766.

I love the combined taboos of not only incest, but teachers and student. It would have been even hotter if she had one in each hole. That would teach her about being a whore.

So much fun

Not only Dr.'s make house calls. Good teachers go the extra mile for the betterment of students. Hot literotica at its finest. Aloha from Hawaii.

Let's read about how the wife entertains at least four men at the next party.

Btw...I gave this story a five*

Pretty fuckin hot