All Comments on 'He Let Them Have Me #01'

The questions about this story... Only after 22 years of marriage they found out what they were? Was she sure that after all this she would respect her husband? That's because without respect, the love ends fast...And that was showed when she though: "I had no idea what Kyle would do. I'm not sure I cared. I loved him and didn't want our marriage to end, but if it did, so be it..." For an easy fuck with a married man (whose wife was a laughing figure, and being the husband's slut, she must be fucking all the guys too, and so her husband was a cuckold too...) ready to let go her 22 years old happy (?) marriage...2* because it's well written and in the end both wanted that...

I just skipped to the scoring and I gave a resonant 1*

keep on writing!

When you don't care enough about your spouse to mourn the death of your marriage, it's obvious that it's over.

As a 40 yr old man, I couldn't care less about fitting in or being liked and I'm typical in that regard.

He could have them both together with his wife

what we want is for you to go away and die.

Deleting negative comments .How.sad.Non erotic man hating drivel.Thats all this was.Keep manipulating your scores so you get the 4 yout so.desperately desire.Either way instill this was just not erotic nor even remotely believable. You can delete this now and have bonniet, vastiesmith and her crazy cousin anon write glowing reviews for this mess.I.did like one thing you said Writing stories to piss people off Truly the thought process of a.normal person.Really? You should.get back on your mess as.soon as possible

Need gray to tell her he wants to add her daughters to his little harem. Now that she is Gray slut lets see him use her rough.

no clue why you think yourstillfun.

You're an idiot. ONE STAR. Happy now author?

Not sure why people hated it so much but it was hot and everyone got what they wanted.

For allowing vastiesmith2 to make a comment that has nothing to do with the story. Critic the story, not other readers.

Judging from the authors name and story tags not one worth reading. No score, hoping for a better day tomorrow. I'm finding myself going back and reading older stories by well known erotic writers, since most of today's posting stink. What's up with all these willing cuckold/slut tales? Are there really that many perverts/sickos reading on this site, that they're being catered too? Don't answer that, it's obvious they are.

I agree with wondering why the haters even bother to read the stories. Perhaps they feel it is their duty.

Good POV on this one looking forward to more parts.

The author has skills and accomplished exactly what she wanted to do in straightforward, articulate manner. The story researched the logistics of group motorcycle riding and integrated them seamlessly into plot. I got a little nostalgic for that.

The cuck thing doesn't push my buttons. What xleglover ( in his best installments ) with this theme is detail the crash, fears and danger that are the flip side to illicit high. The Gray character was one trick bull and if your not into the lifestyle, then the tedious scenes start to accrue. But I'm not vehemently complaining, the disclaimer disclosed ultimate destination.

To my mind , the narrator is an intelligent woman. Giving reader positive aspects of Kyle's characters and the alpha blowhard aspects to Gray would have given story another dimension. Maybe next time the author won't pander so completely to cuck blueprint. There is untapped potential to be tapped if imstillfun wants to take her characters to next level.

I gave this a 5

offset the asshole of Lit's 1 vote

Some old fat bikers fucking. Just lovely. Now my underwear is uncomfortable. Those 55 year old super studs get to me every time. What a great idea though. Not the story, going to your page and giving all your stories a one. I propose that all normal people do just that. Let's see if we can get all these stories back below 2 where they belong. Thanks for the nice idea. Oh yeah, the story sucked.

Really it deserved for the time lost to write this pile of shit

Why waste time to read ?

The only useful thing is to go to the last page and vote 1*

A well deserved 1*

1*

for allowing bonnietaylor2/vastiesmith2 to make a comment. Flamers never have anything to say about the story, just other readers.

It's a chore clicking on that one star every day.

First have to click on the story, then scroll down and jump to last page, then click 1 star then back three times to get to something worth reading.

5!!!!!!

eat shit and die. This is s good story

You 1s gotta work harder. Do you know how many 5s it takes to counter just 1 1*.

It was creative and well-written, and I'll be watching out for more from you!

5*

Good plot. Fun read. Thanks for the story.

Definitely some hot sex but I still don't like wimp husbands and slut wives who disrespect their husband. It one thing to do what she was doing and another to be thinking what she was. She should love and respect her husband more... Not questioning whether she would fuck him again. If this type of activity ends or diminishes the enjoyment of sex with her husband on of her husband it is not worth it and is wrong since the marriage will be over.

Hopefully she and her husband can make up and he can forgive her... Then continue letting her act like a slut instead of being a slut. Big difference.

Mostly due to the authors note that this was merely cuck bait. The author sounds like he's almost as big an asshole as the douchebags who vote 1 without reading it. The story was ok, honestly not my cup of tea, but definitely would have earned a three if it wasn't written to intentionally piss off douchebags.

Excellent chapter. You've set the stage for me, I see me in your writing and you make me hot. You're one of the best writers on Literotica, I love your stories and can't wait for more. I read this one with my husband and we loved it. xoxoxox Annette

Can't wait for the daughters to get involved.

You're one stupid bitch. How many times do you think you can rate a story? Stupid bitch, read the rules, before you go all gun hoe. Talk about an asshole. This bitch sure got one. Gave a ONE star. Wimpy guys and cuckolds are not erotic, only to idiots like this author and his followers.

Starting a story like this is a guarantee to draw out every closet-cuck in the county.

They will read, spank a tiny monkey, then post negative comments in a fit of shame while normal people laugh their asses off at them.

The only way to get more of these insecure dweebs out of their closets would be to add "gay" to the description, but they might spurt before even reading if you do that....

The story was unconvincing. Even for fiction. I understand Kyle getting lead along , and being blinded by the light. To a certain extent. But was he also deaf, dumb and stupid? Can he not see that he and his wife are being used? That seemed far fetched. And his wife was worse. Forget what she does in the story. Why does she do it? A happily married Mother of two, with two kids and she suddenly turns into a slut?

That was both implausible and unbelievable. Not good. Not good at all. 1 star.

Congrats ;)

This is a great story! gave it a 5

@gdsgdgdgedrt If bonnie and vestie give 5***** at good stories there it is mistake to give 1*.

Hear, hear, the CUCKIE has spoken. Where you been dickhead? Haven't read your flowing words lately? Come back for more cuckie stories? Well you come to the right place. This category is full of wimpy cucks like you that slurp come out of bonnietaylor's cunt. Did you have a good lunch at her Y wimpy? Bet you enjoyed the load I left for you.

Author is crowing how this piece of shit story is creeping toward four. Let's make sure it's creeping the other way folks and all the other cuckie stories he's written.

I can't believe that cunt actually got herself two ID's to spout off her nonsense. How fucked up is that? Anonymous let's report her every time you see one of her comments flaming others. Let's see if this site has the guts to do something about the flamers whose only purpose is to insult others.

But you decide. the asshole of LIT or me. I hope the hell the owners here will do something and that's to get rid of this pos annony!

these stories are good and the writers are excellent. YOU just hate the idea of a woman being in charge and getting laid. Your wife did that to you . And she loves how you bitch like the fag you are~! 5 to help the score and the writer. Eat shit annony!

So, not counting repeats I think the comments are about 15 for 21 agaist.

But I have to include 23 favorite story ratings from different names,

And the new favorite author ratings

Out of 14,000 readers only 337 voted

And the story is creeping up so far from a 2.84 to a 3.67. All stories creep up the more people read them.

Funny because if you think of it, it takes 3 5* votes to bring 1 1* vote even up to a 3. 1* votes have a lot of power. Yet it's still creeping up. I also have to remember that voters are a self selecting population, with the haters being more militant and emotional.

So even if this is the worst, at lease more than 1/2 the people like the story. That works for me.

And yes, lots of authors write stories to anger their readers. The goal of a good story is to make you feel something. If you're angered, disgusted, or turned on. As an author I've obviously made you feel something.

FYI, those of you turned on. The stories for you. The rest is just gravy.

and it won't be on your little 3 inch cock!! I reported you!

I reported you too.

I am not really into the cuckold thing, but love a hot wife story. Good writing, good setup and I liked the characters. Thanks for the JO material!

Loved it. One of the best cuck stories I have ever head and I have read more than a few. No, actually this was the BEST Cuck story I have ever read, looking forward to subsequent installments....

Stories like this are simply depressing.... Made more so but nut jobs line Bonnie... There is simly no accounting for taste....

Could have had the other girl take a turn with her,

Would have been better if cuckold had gotten into some bi stuff, fluffing cock, cleaning. Thanks for the read.

Lovecuck stories and this one 5*s, would like a part 2 involving her daughters, they seem primed already. Please

Story was ok but the ending sucked

....because she's everyman's fucktoy.

I wonder how the neighborhood barbecue will go later in the summer, when all the wive's discover their men are fucking the village bicycle....and I wonder how much she'll love it when she gets spurned, publicly embarrassed and called out by her former friends and neighbors.

All the while, their husbands drop by unannounced throughout the day and night to fuck her silly.

What a life.

I loved the way you described her realization of what she and her husband both wanted out of their new lifestyle. Her actions after she warmed to the idea were creative and hot. Keep writing for us, please!

it would be great to be used like that.

I liked the build up, the apprehension, and submission. But to go from barely knowing what a cuckold was to cumslut, cumdumpster? Seems stretch so fast.

curious if the other guys taunt Kyle about being a cuck. Is he humiliated or are some of the others like him?

From fantasy to reality. In the minds of some reality is born and then anger emerges. This is truly a fascinating sight to see. I struggle to imagine why someone would grow as upset as some of the coment writers above. Gosh I would simply turn the page.

As for the story telling: well a journey existed with names becoming characters and an act of sexual fantasy turned on the reader who enjoys this genre of sex story. Job done. Keep writing

Geez, what's up with these screwballs? Get a life why don't they?

Excellent story, the plot is not exactly my cup of tea, but it is very well written with extremely hot sex...and isn't that why we are here?

Well written story + extremely hot sex + drives the wackos crazy = a solid five star rating for a solid five star author. In fact, I give it a 5+++. Imstillfun, you sure are!

True, the commenting closet cucksters are eunuchs or virgins with neckbeards, but these LW stories are their IMAGINARY wives - let them fantasize and rant while we laugh, hurts no one.

The husband wanted to become a cuckold and he selected the bull for his wife. The bull played his role to introduce the wife into the lifestyle which she wholly adopted once he got her husband's ok. Of course, it is a fantasy given the speed of the story but I am sure there are real people into this lifestyle. Not my cup of tea but it is ok since everyone consents.

No, not mine but most likely yours. Only cucks like you would enjoy these type of stories. Lap it up puppy, there's more cum for you where that came from. You can go directly to the source, bonnietaylor2.

Great story by a great author. The sex was extremely hot. More please.

I'm sitting in my office at work reading your stories and trying not to cum in my pants. Great story. Can't wait to read the rest.

I am the husband of a hot wife so we share your experiences but not as a cuck. We mutually share her lovers.

Bill

It started out good but her wanting to be a slut took the challenge and FUN out of it.

Excellent story, Very well written with extremely hot sex.

Kyle knows what he is and enabled his wife to enjoy herself. The couple is lucky to have Gray in their lives.

Where can I meet a guy no guys that are like this that would change my sweet prude wife into a cock crazed sut and me her cuckold? This is one hell of a start can't wait to read more....

I enjoy your efforts at upsetting anti-cuck readers. Fuck 'em if that can't accept alternate realities of life.

Very sexy and teasing story. I loved it.

Please more please! For the sake of erotic literature and my reading enjoyment more chapters where the girls get involved with both Gray and the husband's cuckolding.

I know there are more chapters. Sorry I should have been clearer. I read all four and feel that the story screams for more chapters delving deeply into Gray and the daughters and Kyle. It is a very well crafted story! Love Cat

I don't get the criticism. It is a story. It is an escape. FWIW, in real life I have been the "bull" in this type of circumstance before. I have had women offer their daughters to me sexually. Most of the time it has been to keep me interested and not altogether healthy but I know this can happen. They were all single moms but to have a mother "slut out" her daughter in your behalf is singularly exciting. Keep writing, imstillfun, you are closer to the truth than you might believe.

I have been with 11 women who wanted to let their "inner slut" run free. Married, unsatisfied, just finding now who they are sexually. Very successful beautiful women, lawyers, doctors, brokers. MFF play, DPs, orgies, slut wear, cock worship, restraint, submission, adult resorts and the attendant overwhelming sex play, you name it. It isn't common but it isn't rarely, the author's stories ring true. I would love a mother daughter story where the mom corrupts her daughter and actually helps her "stud" fuck her daughter, offer her daughter for " use."

Awesome writing! Very real and believable. It's delectable to see this wife, and any wife is capable, if she chooses, to open up sexually. No husband can resist this. It's refreshing to read a story without the need to subject the husband to degradation. The voyeuristic display of the husband was excellent. The writer's ability to capture the vividness and flow demonstrates a sophistication and admiration of the art of erotica.

I am busy reading all your work and let me tell you that you are getting fives! I agree with you that all the detractors are more than likely men in denial about their submissive side and you are right they are hilarious to read!

Lighten the fuck up guys!

that last anon was hilarious. He's pretending to be a shrink and knows all about the other readers just by reading a few sentences. Wow, talk about a swelled head.

Lighten up? Good advice anon. Start doing it, want to be cuckie.

loved the story and the sexual tension

Hahahaa. Love the opening comments. I usually don't read them but glad I did here. I clicked on six stars. Now I'm gonna go back and read it.

Thanks.

T

U.S. Eastern seaboard

So well written. I think you should write a book about a hot wife and publish it. It would sell. I give it a 5, more if I could. This story is really a cut above all others on this site. Can't wait to read the other three chapters of it.

I have a story coming Called Bob&Angie I think you will like.

I gave you a 5 just to counteract the haters. It is just fantasy for goodness sake.

usual shit from another WHORE "author".

That's not to counter the haters. That's coz it is a FANTASTIC story. Well done. Loved it! Sooo happy to see there's parts 2-4. Yay!

Just have to vote down everything this writer posts because she's cheats to get these scores.

Good fantasy porn. And all you Anonymous's should read the foreword to this author's stories: It is a fantasy, written by a willing amateur. If you cannot write something encouraging, do not bother writing anything. One Simon Cowell is all that this world needs.

And your new number 1 fan...

This worthless shit is one of the worst on Lit !

It should come with permanent 1* score. Vile !

Love it! Keep it coming

Misery, Humiliation, Divorce get out NOW !

usual shit from another WHORE "author".

It was so close to being really good for me. I was super into it, but then their daughters were there. Or she went from okay with Gray fucking her to being okay with it in front of a bunch of people. It distracted from the rest of the story.

I love the sense of anticipation that builds through the story. Keep ignoring the hateful comments; no doubt most of them have some fantasies others would find distasteful

If I was kyle, I'd be sure to clean her cunt with my tongue when they got done with her.

My wife was a biker slut for a few years. We attended rallies and she would love showing off in her slut clothes. She fucked several different dudes at the rallies. It was not.

I have had the cuckold fantasy for most of my adult life. In my first marriage, I found a young woman interested in my wallet and my fantasy of being cuckolded. She broke my marriage, actually called my wife while we fucked one night and that ended that. I married Jessica shortly after the divorce and she cucked me on my wedding night. Today I wear chastity device 24/7 and suck dick with wreckless abandon. Her bulls are super hung and I am her cum slut, cleaning her out after most dates and in-person fuck sessions. I hate it when she brings them home, ignores me and closes the bedroom door, forcing me to listen to them talk dirty, grunt and cum together. Your story is pretty good. Keep it going.

I haven't read this story yet but I am looking forward to when I have enough time to read all the chapters. I so love your comments I just had to write my thoughts and give it a vote of 5

1 votes are deleted when the mods get around to it. If you strongly dislike a story, vote 2.

But you should actually read at least some of it before voting.

I am a sissy who desires to be a real woman and I want a husband just like Kyle know he likes seeing me be a cum slut for the guys.

I loved your story.

Once I started I could not stop

Until I was at the end.

Thank you.

I hope that you have done

More like this. :)