All Comments on 'His, Completely'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
She should leave that lazy putz of a husband

with a dirty kitchen and unwashed clothes and leave for a one week vacation. He likes to live that way, let him enjoy it. Oh and unplug the refrigator before you leave.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
You got to be kidding

No body saw them in a laundry mat unbelievable.

Velvet ViseVelvet Visealmost 18 years ago
Fantastic

Very well written, imaginative, plenty of details to set the ambiance but not too much. Only spotted one typo so that allowed the reader to really get into the story without being thrown off track. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wow

Very well written, anticipation, need, excitement, absolutely delicious!

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10about 7 years ago
Boring

What does 'Red Sauce' on slacks and being angry at a lazy spouse have to do with getting Laid in a Laundromat?

Answer: NOTHING.

That is exactly what this story has going for it.

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