by simon13
with a dirty kitchen and unwashed clothes and leave for a one week vacation. He likes to live that way, let him enjoy it. Oh and unplug the refrigator before you leave.
Very well written, imaginative, plenty of details to set the ambiance but not too much. Only spotted one typo so that allowed the reader to really get into the story without being thrown off track. Keep up the good work!
Very well written, anticipation, need, excitement, absolutely delicious!
What does 'Red Sauce' on slacks and being angry at a lazy spouse have to do with getting Laid in a Laundromat?
Answer: NOTHING.
That is exactly what this story has going for it.