All Comments on 'Humanity Ch. 03'

I like the way all you all swing

I love how you normalize nudity and sexuality... it’s exciting and satisfying while also being a natural part of everyday life. I’m always eager to read each of your new additions. Thanks!

I wish you’d continue writing about the Humanity group

Maybe even make it a series

This is a great story with a concept organisation that I wish really existed. There are quite a few grammatical errors which is a bit disappointing. The word whom is often used here when who should be used. Whom is supposed to be used with a preposition in front and who is supposed to be used to replace a person. This is a common mistake unfortunately and surprising coming from such an experienced author.