All Comments on 'Incestuous Situation'

pLEASE DEVELOP THE STORYINTO A GOOD READ .

as you ended it.

good that this story too came to an end, what a 'horrorful read' !!

That was bad. Just really, really bad.

Your characters had no development and were flat. There was no plot beyond I saw my sister masturbating, I masturbated, then we fucked. Which, by the way, isn't a plot. There was no description of your setting. There was no timeframe. There was nothing but a bunch of words, which when I read them, it reminded me of crap I'd try to pass off as good writing in the third grade.

Please, please, remove your story, pull it from the site, and work on it. Find a professional paid editor if you have to, but re-write it. I fail to understand how this made it on to the site.

Such a lame story