All Comments on 'Indian Incest: All Are Involved Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
you need to improve your english,good try! but story lost in pathetic english

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doindiadoindiaalmost 13 years agoAuthor
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
EPIC!

Whoa! This is just fabulous. The English used is too good. Even the mistakes are so honestly Indian! Like I'm reading some story in Tinkle or something similar. I'm totally hooked onto this!

behnkayaarbehnkayaarover 11 years ago
KIA BAAT HAI

mast story liklhi hai yaar. ek bhai ka lund kahada kar diya, mujhe ek chudasi behna ki talash hai, jisski choot mein lund pel sakun

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bad story, bad presentation

Frankly awful, i realy don't know where to begin

I kinda figured how awful it was from the character presentation, enough to say no Indians with a BBA education are bad in english, could not realy read more than first page, the grammar was awful, the narration all over the place, Punctuation pretty much non existent, plzz stop writing, u are wasting your time

danny4u4danny4u4almost 9 years ago
Its Hottest Story, ALl Parts are HOT too....

Its Hottest Story, ALl Parts are HOT too....

I read this and i cant stop... C__Mmin@....

Really hot story..

I wanna read all parts.

Please post some new stories.

Urs

Danny

doindiadoindiaover 5 years agoAuthor
Critics and Comments please

Dear Readers,

Please comment and give star on this Story.

UmraojiUmraojialmost 2 years ago
I love it

Nicely crafted but you need to get the story proofread. Please let me know if you want me to do it.

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