All Comments on 'Irresistible Impulse'

Excellent storyline. You really know how to tell a story. Please keep writing.

We need a wimp fetish category to put this sort of crap

Is it possible, in you peoples minds, that the husband(?), could have picked up a cricket bat, and beat the living shit out that asshole. Why you INSIST, on portraying the husbands in these stories, as weak, pathetic, spineless, men, with bigger pussies than their, UNLOVING wives have, is beyond me. Yeah, the asshole could steal my wife too probably, but he'd have some major damage to the equipment that allowed him to do it. SHIT!!!!!! I'm sick of this crap!

Tim C.

But I prefer to call it the "Dumb Story" category...what a waste of writng talent and time. Sheesh.

Well written crap, but crap in a nicely wrapped gift box is still CRAP. They really need a new catagory here, "men who pee sitting down". This fellow needs to mount a cricket bat on his mantle after making prudent use of it. Kneecap ol' Jerry Boy just once with it while wifey looking on and both will straighten right up. Trust me on this.

I, and I believe a great many others here, are sick of reading stories where bullies and emotional blackmailing spouses slide through stories unscathed. I remember a day when evil, for there is no other word for it, didn't win. It seems to be the norm now.

Regards,

C

Unbelievable stupid story.

of why British men sit down to pee.

this guy is a total asshole.letting his wife and best friend fuck in his house?! bullshit! is he missing his testicles, or is he wimpering pussy? if this ever happens to any of you guys, do what i woulda done. take a nail gun to his nuts and then soak her tampons in cayenne pepper.

new literotica category for stories about idiots who continually subjugate themselves to cuckold stories and then provide useless and demeaning commentary to the author. If the topic offends you, stop reading it, dumbasses.

the author is a no good god dam pathetic turd

I hope your wife and family and Mother is beaten raped tortured and murdered.

take a hand gun

Laod it Place the barrel end to your farhead

and pull the trigger

Do husbands like this really exist? I know it is fantasy and men can be portrayed as the author desires, but I can not understand even in fantasy land how men can be as spineless as described here. Maybe I've been lucky in that I have been isolated in a small section of the general population i.e. military bases where the training of airborne troops seem to instill a sense of pride and dignity that seems to be lacking everywhere else, or so the authors of wimp stories have us believe. I always read these stories wondering if the author is maybe a frustrated female and is using fantasy to hit back at males in general?

had an irristible impulse also .... say a 357 to the temple ...pull the trigger and swear it was anaccident that my wife didnt mean to pull the trigger....if im going to kill the bastard ...the slut will take the fall...lol what am i saying this story is about as believable as a cartoon....back off till his advantage goes away then kill his sorry ass...friend no ... and the wife if she wants any chance she woulkd have to take the credit for killing him... otherwise she loses everything...she could get away with it as he was blackmailing her and was raping her ... otherwise she would have no family as hubby would go to jail and social services would take the kids...crap story

the sadesty and most non-erotic cuckold story yet. What the fuck is wrog with this man???? Man i asked ??????? Why doesn't he just throw them both out. For god sake I could have screamed at the bloody wimp. Dump her fucking ass or kill the big cock fucker. I'm so mad right now I could kill them all three of them.

why some men seem to think that sex is the be all end all to women. Some things are more important, love, fidelity, respect. Guys who think women worship cocks must be hiding a worship for them themselves. Sorry, while well written, this story stinks.

Your story obviously hit a raw nerve with many of the "macho" men who commented below. What are they so afraid of? Why does a woman's sexuality knaw at their psyche so strongly? I am sure that a story about a husband getting a "little" on the side would not give them the slightest problem. But a wife, God forbid, shoot her!

Great work. Few authors can get any comments let alone such strong reactions. Keep up the good work and don't let the neaderthals get you down.

to the husband's balls. I mean he surely can see his wife slipping more and more away from him. she is pitty fucking him now that's all. I think the reality would have hit him the day after the vacation with her lover when she told him she didn't think of him at all while she was away and she fucked her lover a million times. She tol dher husband that she was able to fuck her lover w/o having to wory about her husban's wimppy ass and feelings. I mean HELLO!!!!! Wwake the fuck up, the husband has for all intensions lost her now anyway to her lover. Why put up with the sadness and the humility and disgrace? So I think he has one of three things left to do. 1)File and throw them both out. 2)Tell the lover he has to leave because the husband can't take any more and if the wife goes GOD BLESS HER! And make sure he gets the kids and files a law suit against the lover for the break up. And 3) lastly like many have said. Kill the MF lover and make it look like the wife did it. But anyway you cut it this marriage is over. What I would really love to se is somehow the husabnd wins in the end and both the whore wife and her lover have something very bad happen to them both. If this writer wants to try and get some of his self respect back he will figure out a way of making that happen. I hope he/she does just that and makes this story a very good one at the end. Again I agree with the others I was so mad I could have kiled all three of them. The lover for his nasty attitude and his humilation of his so called frinedand what he did to the marriage. The husband for being the most wimpy man in any story I have read, and of course the wife for her opening her legs and fucking the big cock lover like she has done. I feel for the children born already and the one that seems to be on the way. V

Living during centuries in splendid isolation had obviously nasty consequences for some British brains.

Bavarian

It seems as if every (with two exceptions) UK male author loves writing about pussy-whipped husbands who love to watch their wives getting fucked by better men. I can only assume that the better men are from another country and have not been infected by whatever is emasculating the male population over there.

BTW, keep drinking that imported bottled water Wanderer and Robert12.

Total unconvincing, the husband would have kicked her out and cut his friends balls off

Its fine with me if a woman wants to be a whore and fuck every man she comes across with, but if thats what she wants to do, then why the fuck get married. Also, if i wanted a whore for a wife, i would have married one. As for the story, it just plain sucked. I knew where it was going from the start so i just skipped to the ending hoping that the guy had grown some balls, guess not.

Writing was good but the story line just wasn't believable.

I know I have read this story before somewhere.

I got started with page two...A dumb stupid husband scratching his head and saying Gawwww is fine for Mortimer Snerd..but what is supposed to pass for a man? Give me a break. When Toby followes his wife into Jerry's room and he watches them together and WALKS AWAY? Come on give me a real break..I had to stop reading there..anything afterward was just taking up space..Reminds me of those movies that have a weak plot and the whole movis is crap just filling in time...

And this is erotic

Lit.com definitely needs a cuckold classification for tripe such as this story. We readers would at least be alereted not to read this kind of junk.

"Chagrined" was right. These kinds of stories are about "men who pee sitting down". They could also be classified under "Women Who Marry Men Pretenders," or just "Wimp Stories". I will now have the good sense to look for the name "ukresearcher" and avoid reading anything he/she writes.

Cheeers!

I just hope its not your real life your describing otherwise I would say p... b......

Best story I have read for ages. It was well written and a superb piece of erotica with room for the story to develop. Excellent, well done. Ignore the critics who seem to struggle to put one vaguely coherent sentence together and who hate anything which isn't lovely and nice and heartwarming.

I only wish the comment section was before the story. What was the author thinking about? The story has a ridiculus premis and gets worse. Storys like this get people to stop reading 'Loving Wives'

Try reading some of Winterfrog's stories and you will feel a lot more real worls.

This is truly one of the stupidest stories I have ever had the misfortune of reading.

I would give the story line a -50 and a new writer a plus

100 for being braver than the rest of us.

If you are writing a wimp hubby, cuckold story, it is usually smart to define it as such. You are welcome to do as you please, but the reaction you get may not be what you hoped for.

We have some real good writers in the UK, maybe you could

contact a couple of them to sort this out.

I have always maintained the story line has to have SOME

credibility. I don't like stories that are senseless and

that may be some of what you are reading here. Get a friend

or another writer to read it first. A lot better than being

on the receiving end of "nastygrams".

That said, thank you for your efforts and I wish you more

success with the next one...Dave

award for having the most bad comments in one day. Sorry but I can't give you a better score, except for effort. Nice for a first try but the story left a lot to be desired.

This so called writer is into humiliation. There is no loving wives, BDSM/Dominate/Submissive, erotic couplings, group sex.

Just humiliation he must feel for himself, trying to justify his cowardice existence.

Eh? I suppose this is well written, but so unbelievable. I read all 4 pages expecting some kind of fortitude by Toby. But no. Even allowing for dramatic licence it stretches credibility too much to believe Toby would allow all of this to happen. The wife has basically told him to fuck off, but he's not strong enough to do it.

For the author's sake I hope this isn't autobiographical.

Our cream pie loving comrad from the UK, we are sure, is busily banging away on the next "exciting" chapter.

Gorge, Tyree, Marc, Tyrone, Aishat, Nell, Mark, Jonathan, Jamal, Jaamuu, and all the brothas each brought a full load and the nice hubby's too busy to turn to us this time, to ask for our voyeurism.

"Look how I am gonna clean her up real good, y'all," he says, smiling that gapped-toothy mouth, just before the nice wife yangs his face right back into her netherworld region. If you's quite enough, you could year the slurping sound, plus fast breathin', as the little dicky brother/author tries to clean the delicious cream pie continuously deposited during the past a couple days....

Gosh, it's so darn errr erotic story, yeah, that's right lol.

I kept hoping that somehow there would be a redeeming feature at the end of the story, either he walks out, or she realizes what she has done, or even telling her husband that he has made her pregnant again and that's the end of it with his so-called friend. Sad to say, all we found was a husband who loses more ending up with nothing favourable at the end of this story.

andrew peters

Are you mad?

He has a big dick.... does this make him bullet proof? Will he still live after you stick a knife through his heart? Why doesn't he cut the guys dick off when he's in bed screwing his wife.....

I was REALLY hoping for a revenge story.... but this guy is such a wimp..... he deserves getting shit on!

Yuck..... could have been a much better story with a bit of "I'm gonna get medievil on your ass" revenge!

go away.

You've got to be kidding! This is the most unbeleivable dribble I have ever read. Try to make this some what beleivable.

You had better try and finish this mess of a story....it needs a resolution!

You know what? I think this is a tongue-in-cheek story about the wimps we all *know* populate most of England who love being cuckolded. :)

Is there any element of those stories missing from this? LOL

english writer. Do you type one handed? It should not surprise us that an elderly jaded sick brit should be any different than many of his pathetic helpless mates who demean themselves and all men by being such a sick subhuman excuse for a human as they do.

The puzzling part is why so late in life do they expose themselves as the non-self respected pitiful person that they are. Was the writer a closet wimp for many years of weak freakie life or is he now bored enough that the pub wimps have drafted him as a cuckster posterboy.

One would assume that because no one else could respect them that they formed pub clubs to compare the male weakness traits that excite them the most.

One must presume that their families have shunned them for years for good reason. Further that their ex-wives left them as soon as they could since they could no longer tolerate or respect hubbies desperate need for humiliation to get it up and jackoff.

So, writer I'll bet even this accurate measurement of your helpless weaknesses excites and fills your need of humiliation. Was your father like this? What caused you to fail yourself as a man?? Or are you a woman?

I can't understand a writer who feels turned on about cuckoldry. They should have a sub-site within Literotica just for these men in skirts. You suck balls!

There's not much point in name-calling, but I find this story incredibly sad and disturbing.

For one thing, it's not remotely realistic--though of course that's true for many or most stories on this site. But Jerry the friend is an utter monster, a true sociopath without any redeeming humanity, and Louise despite her occasional affectionate moments is selfish beyond belief.

Like many other commenters, I find myself longing for Toby to show some manhood: throw Jerry out, leave, divorce his wife, even act out violently. It appears that that simply isn't your intention, it isn't the way you want to tell the story--and I would defend absolutely your right to tell your stories the way you want to.

It just seems to me to be such an unredeemedly sad story, and I guess I don't understand what pleasure it would give you to write it, or how we can get pleasure from reading it.

I hope to see a continuation that turns in another direction, or perhaps other stories with less depressing themes.

ohio

I'm moving to England ASAP. I mean a black man with a big cock will be able to fuck himself to death in a matter of weeks. OPK.aybe months if I learn to pase myself. I never would have guesed there were so many white men over there that wanted a black man or a better man with a big cock to fuck their wives. I can't wait to get there and start fucking as many as I can find. I mean they must be standing on the street corners with sighs saying "I want my wife to get fucked by a man! A real man with a big dick. Please help me."

And so here I am. Maybe I can even knock a few of them up so I can have some mixed kids living with us. Oh I didn't tell you, I plan to move in just like this guy did in the story only the husband will support me completely. He'll go to work while his wife lets, no begs, me to fuck in all her holes over and over again. Sounds like a great life to me. Keep writing these story so more of you English men wnat to try it. Great idea!! WWW.

very well written. it drew me in and held me until the end. i hate the subject mattter though.I think it does need a proper ending. Does any man (even in a story) have so little self repsect or not smart enough to see the harm this is doing to the rest of his life.

Your writing is OK but there is nothing erotic about your story. There are so many clever things Toby could do to handle his situation but you made him into a dickless wimp. Louise does not love her husband - she only wants his money - nothing whatsoever erotic about that.

You have written two stories with essentially the same result - husband disgraced/impotent; wife is a slut; family destroyed and marriage is a joke. Although you have writing talent these stories read like a tale about a suicide. Some commenters suggest that people do not read your stories if they do not like cuckold stories however there are many stories which start out like this one but the characters rise to overcome the situation. There is no likeable characters in these stories and the plots are not believeable so I must conclude that your purpose is to get as many comments as possible for the story.

I liked it up until then, but found it both unbelievable and uninteresting that the guy would simply surrender his "soul mate" to this big, egotistical clown. Unless there is to be some sudden and severe retribution, the whole story is pointless for me.

I cannot believe that any man or woman would go along with such bullshit. In my opinion there is absolutely no redeeming social value to this story, and in fact no value. Who in the hell would want to have children raised by such parents.

Well, I didn't finish the story really. As soon as "Tobe" said that rather than accepting Devina's statements that he'd have to "look into this" I knew exactly what was coming and skipped to the ending.

And the ending was exactly what I expected, terrible if you want any kind of sympathetic characters.

Sorry UK, but this kind of story is something that I hate. Its not so much that there is no eroticism here, its more that I can't related to any of the characters.

You have a "hero" who is a ocmplete wimp and entirely unwilling to accept that the marriage is over.

You have a "wife" who is about as loyal as Benedict Arnold, and not worth the ring. I can't imagine any man with a single testicle, let alone 2 letting her act that way without throwing her out.

You have a "best friend" who is completely disloyal to his friends, and yet never once got beat up for stealing wives? And you also make it seem like he has a magic cock. Sorry, but one of the other authors had a great point in one of his stories when one husband worried about his wife cheating. She basically told him that while technique can make a difference, its love that truly makes sex special.

I'm not surprised that Chagrined was one of the first and loudest complainers. Read his Unbreak My Heart series to see how he views cheating and how a man should react when he finds his wife in an extended affair. Personally I agree with him, although I doubt I could be quite that vicious in real life should the occasion arise.

Mr. Long Poster

Well written, but not what I like, personally.

One thought though, while not all Wimp cuckold stories

come from England, a rather disproportionate amount of

the England writers write Wimp Cuckold stories. This

smells of a cultural problem, but ...hell... I dunno.

Just plain disturbing.

God! What a piece of shit.Where do you authors come up with all these wimp husbands?Any husband that sat still to what Jerry was doing,should have his balls cut off as he doesnt need them anyway.Say! You could have made Jerry a nigger and then you could join That group of sick authors who write"White Slut Wife Fucks Nigger Lover,While Hubby Gets the Drinks"Club.

this is a story about a wimp, a bastard and a cow. there is nothing to like about any of the main characters. simply put, it's a horrible, pathetic story.

What a load of crap. Read the first page, then the last 2 paragraphs. No imagination whatsoever. This writing gives an insight into the sort of person you are. The good thing is that I now know not to read stories submitted by you :)

I find it really amazing and fascinating that when it is the wife who is being totally humiliated and sexually dominated, that the comments garner better ratings and comments. Yet, when the reverse is presented, the ratings and comments are brutally harsh. UK, you did a good job telling a story. Obviously the subject matter does not appeal to a great many readers here (including myself), but, you had the guts to put yourself out there for critique. I do hope that you get as much a kick out of reading the comments as I do. Please do not take it personally. They do not know you, so how could it be personal? I think that they just feel that if in that type of situation, they'd be full of vengence. I know that I would. I've warned my hubby from the beginning (20 years ago) that if he cheated - him, the her and anyone that knew about or abetted it, would be in a world of hurt. And that's no smoke. I'd do everything I could to wreck my vengence on all involved. Continue on with what you feel you need to write. It is my bet that many of those that commented here will be looking for your continuation of this story (please give the guy some balls if you do), or for your next submission.

The only reason for my 50% rating is because you have talent as a writer. The story sucks. The story starts out pretty good but almost immediately goes into utter stupidity and only gets dumber and dumber til I could only read the first sentence of each paragragh and finally just went to the end to see if the ending was as bad as the rest of the story, and oh, what do you know, as expected a pathetic ending.

Now, all said, you are a good writer. Let some of the experienced writers rewrite your story, the pieces are there for a hot story.

Why you have stopped without the end ?

I don't like a story without ending ! What's the fool husband get doing now ! His slut-wife don't love him really ! and his frien-bastard is asshole !!! they don't deserve anymore this man !!!

Please end the story and make the husbant throw awat so-called wife and so-called friend !!!!

Or make the husband hit the so-called friend and give a nasty divorce to his so-called wife !!!

and after few years maybe she will discover she hahd had a stupid slut !!! And will come back begging her ex-husband to take her again !!!

Hi,

At the moment, this is unfinished. I disagree that this is "crap." It is a portrait of a man losing his sense of self the longer this goes on. Psychically, the punishment he has received has been extraordinary. And something has to give. There are two keys here--his children and the man's motivation. I would like to suggest that when the author suggests that "Jerry has an agenda" I agree. The agenda is to control not Louise, but Tobey. That is what Jerry gets off on. Yes, the author makes a great deal of Jerry wanting Louise for himself. but that does not explain the strange behaviour of his ever cancerous demands.

My guess is that there is a way to proceed if the story is not going to devolve into abject humiliation. I must say that that route doesn't make sense to me. Yes, Tobey has masochistic/submissive elements, but he is grounded in the love of his children, who do not like what Jerry is doing (after all, he is trying to reattach their mother's love towards himself, and the child he wants Louise to have).

That way requires that we continue down this path till Louise is pregnant with Jerry's child. She has gone to the dark side. The implications of this are: Louise loses sight of her own children as she loses sight of her husband--after all-her children serve to remind her and Jerry of Tobey, the person Jerry is trying to efface. They look like Tobey! They serve to remind her of what she is doing and this is a more dangerous situation for her mentally (never underestimate hormonal changes in a pregnant individual). That leads to unpredictability on her part and large mood swings in the first trimester. She is thouroughly narcissistic, but even that contradiction (her narcissism with her duties as a mother which require connectivity) is going to be difficult to manage. My guess is that the increasingly public nature of her affection for Jerry will spill over into the way she treats "Tobey's children." And Jerry will overdo it. Why? He is a well drawn figure of evil. And the purpose of evil is to disassociate everything that it touches. Jerry will be drawn to do this with Tobey's children. And the contradiction inherent in this attempt will be immediately clear to the kids. And to Tobey eventually, when Jerry fails. He fails, with certainty. They are aware that something is terribly wrong with their situation and their mother and father. And they know Jerry is the cause. He won't be able to snake oil his way into that. And that will leave him either with violence, or an uncaring indifference that will completely infect Louise.

When that happens, then there is a place for Tobey to reemerge as an active person. Unless the author is going down a very dark route, Tobey's love for his kids will emerge--that is a powerful set of emotions that can overcome the despair and depression he now feels (or doesn't have to, so this can be a very dark and hopeless kind of tale, and is that what you, the author, wanted?). I don't know if that involves violence (a baseball bat or pistol is a great physical equalizer) or whether, Tobey, a gentle man by design, just leaves quietly and takes his children with him. If the later, the stage is set for an ultimate confrontation--after all, this isn't really about Loise, its a bout Tobey. Once Tobey doesn't play by Jerry's rules, Jerry loses the plotline entirely. Perhaps even Louise gets the point--after all, if Davine can escape (however damaged) through use of her rational faculties and emotions (sense of self-worth), so can Louise. It wouldn't be the first time that a mother uses violence in order to save her cubs...

So, please, for good or ill, finish the story you have started

I guess the author see himself as the wimp husband and get off being a cuckold because that the only way he can write this stupid excuse of a story.

Hey dude, please send your address to me since I think I would like time wiht your wife. Wimpy. Jesus tthats disgusting

the ball is in your court. After the feed back you got, I believe that you need to do something. What you will do, is up to you... We will be waiting, and we hope that your next instalment will be better acepted. Good luke.

A sick story for you queer motherfuckers written by a sick asshole.

Your basic technical skill is OK--you need a little more practice, but all in all not bad. Your dialogue needs work. Much of it sounds stilted to me--like a stage play dialogue. I am thinking there is a second part to this, although you don't say so in the story. You did leave us hanging just a trifle. But please--keep writing.

I'll say this much--you sure stirred up the pot!!!

JimDinMN

From a psychological viewpoint, I see no reason why the main character in this story will not develop post traumatic stress disorder, lose his sanity, and actually kill both of the offending party.

Why would you write something equally as demeaning to a human being as being put in a concentration camp?

I admit it was written very well, but I do not have any faith in you as a writer and will not read any entries by you ever again.

It is one thing to write a story that involves an affair or cheating, but this main character and the methodical way in which he is abused and the way he is institutionalized into accepting this abuse is fascist.

While I would have shot the big bleeding bastard the first time I knew what was happening your charcter didn't and now must suffer the results. I waited and waited for hubby to do something anything hell even join in with the friend and slut of a wife in a 3 way.

The biggest problems with the story are it quit in the middle and no one is that good to gain that much control over others in such a short time with only consentual sex. You can lose your good sense while having sex or by being too horny/too much in heat but the mind comes back during slack times. None of that explains why the husbands of the wifes are so complacent unless they are enjoying it. It would have been better I think to have had some kind of blackmail over the hubby in the beginning like pics or recordings of his wife if he didn't go along. Then you could string it along till the wife was openly willing and the hubby confused and defeated.

what a sick fucking pathetic story; the damn wimp should just off himself and leave the cunt to care for the kids

The story strings you along. I'm waiting for Toby to turn the tables on Jerry. Not murder, not lawyers and divorce but some kind of revenge that would humiliate him. That is what is required.

In real life I think someone in Toby's position would have to go the divorce rout with a lawsuit against Jerry. I think before the divorce papers are served, he would assert sexual rights over Louise. He should have her suck him off, fuck her in the ass, anything and everything that comes to his mind. Maybe he should slip a micky in on Jerry and then piss on him---that sounds like a Just Plain Bob move but it is justified.

The situation in the story is intolerable for Toby & I think we as readers identify with Toby, though maybe not in the acquiesence to the situation.

And I don't see how the kids could not sense something is going on.

This story is a heightened reality, some aspects of character and human nature completely overshadowing others---not reality.

But author how could you walk away from the story where you did?

I don't think we need 4 pages more to bring this to an end. It would just be a lot of weeping & who-struck-John if the finale is stretched out, but we do need closure. I hope you have the imaginative ingenuity to give Toby sufficient, but not cliche'd revenge.

playingcardcompany

No man can be so lame and survive. i Read the begining and the end.

Waste of webspace

JJ

Stories like this often confirm the fact that a lot of men don’t know the first thing about women.

Women are not men and don’t act like men. Women are far more into the emotion rather than pure animal sex.

The characters also are not believable. The wife, who wants the best of both worlds, insists that she truly loves her wimp husband and only wants sex. It has nothing to do with love... I thought that was a man’s line. But when she returns home from her holiday with her lover she admits she didn’t want to come home to her loving husband.

Total waste of time!!!

Ken 92592

I don't belive the other comments I really enjoyed the story.

You could have posted this story under a different category and probably received a positive feedback. It’s called know your audience. The seemingly masochistic/submissive pleasures of the husband AKA utmost wimpishness, would have been more appreciated in the BDSM section or maybe even in the GAY section. For me, your story was made for most unpleasant read, and I have to admit that I could not finish it.

For some of the other commenters - do not assume that a large number of critical comments are an automatic positive. Sometimes you can just read what’s in the lines and not what’s in between them – i.e. a request to not write this type of stories, at least not in this section of Lit. PLEASE!

Perhaps in the UK there may be women and men like the ones in this story. If so, I am glad I haven't had to go there. The story is well enough written and based on a premise that I just can't take seriously. As a fantasy of a man who sees himself as Jerry... this is a great story! Makes me want to write a story to follow this one to take the story in a direction that has Toby getting more than he deserves and Jerry getting exactly what he deserves.

Your technique is OK, but I can't fathom Toby's response. What he should be doing is refuse to go along with the deal. He should install cameras and audio in many rooms, including Jerry's. What he should then do is make sure he tells Louise, that if she continues to see Jerry it is over between them. He should also see a lawyer to start divorce proceedings, and for a custody battle. Shortly, he will have plenty of evidence of Louise ignoring his request to end the affair, and of her stopping the police from forcing Jerry out. Then he divorces her publically, and takes full custody of the kids, and has her declared an unfit mother. He should get a restraining order on Jerry to prevent him from getting within a 100 fett of him, and his kids. If Louise wants Jerry, she can have them but at the cost of losing everything else meaningful in her life. What Toby needs to do is find someone who is contected with the darker element of society, and have them destroy beyond repair Jerry's genitals ( a broken jaw also would be a good idea). This would leave Jerry manless, and Louise broken since she gave up her home and family for a broken man. It is what both of them deserve. She needs to see Toby very happy with a new lady who is pampered by Toby, and also pampers Toby.

cause if the husband really hates the situation he is in, he will get himself out of it. love cant survive that kind of daily torture. especially, if kids are also involved.

Doesn't this clod know what a .357 Mag is for?

kids and leave!

The story as written doesn't make any sense!

The writing is good - try a nice romance!

Regards, DJ

I read a segment of this and could quickly see the utter incredibility of the husband’s character. It’s lacking of any intelligence commonsense or emotional intelligence. You created a caricature which could carry the rest of your fantasy (despicable to me – but that is just me). With such dumb character you could have lead him between the wife and the lover into a tiger’s cage, and just because they asked him nicely to say hallo to the big cat, he would have entered the cage and said Miaaoooo to the tiger. What a joke.

You could have researcged more about testicles. Obviously you Brits don't have any. Except for Manchester United fans. The typical brit male is a woosey, palsy, goofus who seems to this that every thing is 'tally ho and all that tommy rot..eh wot'

The hubbie in this travesty could have made me happy by killing himself slowly and painfully..that is afterward his ,,,ha ha ha loving wife...got cunt rot and disolved her and the rot got to jerry's dick (oh by the way a brit thinks four inches is large) Does it look like I like Brits...oh no I don't I think all of you need to be vaporized..especially tony Blair...

What kind of man is this? He deserves what he he gets. The story left me with a bad feeling in my guts.

Because if you're an example of "British manhood" (is that an oxymoron?), Iran is gonna kick your ass!

Well constructed, but how do you put so many amoral and unpleasent characters in one story. Common, add a hero somewhere

Absolutely unbelievable character in the husband. I cannot imagine how anyone could accept this ridiculous "deal". The prose is tolerable, I suppose, but the plot and the characters are simply too fantastic to be credible.

her husband. A wandering tomcat on hormones is his friend. Catch them in bed, shoot them both, then throw yourself on the mercy of the court. At most you will get a year or two claiming temporary insanity.

As you may have noticed, there is almost unanimous agreement that this story is one of the worst ever posted on Literotica. All the ingredients are there-naive slut wife, stupid wimp husband , evil thug letcher - *83 readers left comments and if my count is correct 82 thought the story was awful and only one idiot thought it was "excellent"

the Ct.Yankee

Please help the lonely village find their missing idiot - last seen here impersonating a writer

wtf man!? what kind of man allows this to happen? its obvious she doesnt love him and even wants a kid with that bastard. you suck, bit time.

This story should be the leader for all marriages. I'm surprised that just now they are thinking of making a baby, what with all the sperm that Jerry has shot into her womb!u

for a Loving Wife story on an erotic literature site. All of the people in this story, and the author who wrote this pile of childish crap should be taken out of the gene pool. I can honestly say I wouldn't lose a wink of sleep if I read about you having your throat slit. A mentally disburbed, low life like yourself if far more damaging to our society than the local street walker or dope smoker. I doubt you could pass a basic pysch exam.

They are all,except for Davina, they are metaly retarded evn the kids should be terminated. As a matter of fact let's just eliminate/with extreme perjudice/ UKSHITSEARCHER and be done with it

wimp bastard .............

jerry is this weasel, and she does not think she is easily replaced too?

This is terrible

Hermann Goering was a whimpy cuckold's son. His mother's lover lived together the family. Lover of Goering's mother was jewis. I think it was a main couse of Hermann Goering antisemitic future. A wimpy husband grew up a leader of a genocid country!

Sometimes a divorce is the best for THE ALL MANDKIND on the Earth!!!!!!!!!!!!

that bitch would never have got in the house again, if a real man was her husband.

You have to laugh or else you'd cry or internally hemorrhage from stomach twisting as a result of taking these stories seriously. This is the secret to enjoying UK Researcher.

Frankly if you haven't seen & enjoyed to some degree films like Brazil, Fight Club ,12 Monkeys ~ where the world & all that's in it is awry & in thrall to some fiendishly benign new world order~ don't even try . In my case , years of being Cleveland Indians fan has inured me to pain..

I can't beleave that such a poor excuse for a man exists. To write such tripe, I have to beleave that you are GAY. No man with any self respect would put up with such shit. I have read a couple of your stories, and they are all wimpy shit. Sorry I voted, before I read them. My 3's should have been 1's.

In your stories husbands are always Idiots and wimps. No matter what happens, the husband will always lose. No wonder their wives go looking for lovers. This story will keep me from reading any more of your tripe.

I like how the story it written. However, it isn't often that I read a story where I want to jump up screaming for him to grow some balls and kick some ass. My hands are literally shaking with anger. If that was your ultimate purpose, bravo. Please let him grow some balls in the next chapter.

You know back here in the hills where I was raised he would have been dead, gutted and in the bottom of a deep lake the night the husband found out. Wake up and smell the blood, you wimp!!!

The generation of Britts that would fight for anything that was theirs has long since died off. What's left are Britts that will submit to anything, including their wives' boyfriends, their socialist leaders (They have no real freedoms), the EU...hell, just about anyone or anything that seeks to rule them. And to think, this is the country that once produced Churchill, Montgomery, Thatcher, etc. Anything can go to hell in a handbasket, can't it?