All Comments on 'Lust Conquers All'

skipped to the last couple. This is degradation of a woman, of a couple, and of what could have been a good life. Sorry I have to much to do in life to read the shit inbetween.

It did need a page edited out, as there were some repetitions and at times the flow clogged up but it was so well written with very few errors, and lots of good lines. Did it beggar belief? Only so far as it pushed the envelope of seductive originality as it strived for a different angle to a tiring genre. Pretty fucking good in my slut enjoying opinion, thank you author, you've put a LOT into this...Mancelt.

Cassie has moved on. It happens.<P>

But what is really revealing to me is what she does at the end when she has decided Thomas has won: She looks at Kyle, the man she supposedly loved for 14 years (and, according to her, still loves?) and smirks at him as she takes Thomas' dick in her mouth. If that is what she does to someone she loves I would hate to have her actually dislike me!<P>

The earlier poster is right. Lust fades. I rather doubt she will make 14 years with Thomas. Lucky for Kyle he never married her.<P>

Sad story. Thanks for sharing.

Fantastic story, and well written. I'm a normal sort of guy, but you made be able to feel what it must be like to be a woman possessed.

Poor Kyle ---- wonder what happened to them all.

Yes. Story of the month at least regarding content. A few wring errors but who cares. The verbal foreplay was as erotic as the sex. I thoroughly enjoyed the nc/reluctance and sexual hunger of Cassie being manipulated by the predatory Thomas. Will we read what Cassie does with her mouth next? Do Cassie and Kyle regroup and pledge faithfulness but others sense her vulnerability and take advantage? Does the great white hunter Thomas move on to other safaris? Here is a vote to yes for all three!

i feel hot all over. and jealous as hell. i should have written this. it is such an overwhelmingly erotic idea that the words pour into my head hotter than the sperm flowing from the stud's divine cock. the words that i would have used, i mean. subtler, tastier, more suggestive. to describe poor kyle's pain, cassie's bewilderment...so many delicious angles to this story. but alas, it has been written and not by me.

but i won't whine. great story! loved it. still shaking from it. kisses.

I loved it, Thomas.

and since she is serious fucking whack job...

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as erotica this story IS hot. Fabuously well written. But as a serious LW story it is terrible. Scratch one Marriage. I mean come on how does this get saved...?

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<b> This was suppose to be a ONE time thing. Even Thomas did NOT offer to crush and destroy Kyle the man she supposedly loves. The wife intentionally fucked thomas in front of Kyle HOPING to destory the marriage. </b>

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Even at the end when the whore wife realizes what she done.. she goes back to fucking Thomas!

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oh thats right angie since its a straight man that is decent guy THAT is ok right?

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if this vile whore wants to setp out and explore her sexuality--- GREAT! but why should Kyle get destroyed?. HOW... WHY... does the cunt whore wife get the right to change the marriage simply because she WANTS to?

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Does that mean every husband has the right to do whatever he wants to any woman he is married to?

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good to know...

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the "wife" / whore needs to be beaten and raped. Seriously.

comone hat happens Next? this marrage is fucking dead.

She has never been in love except with herself.Auther states this over and over, that she loves Kyle, then shows clearly that she doesn't and never did. Think of people you love, parents, kid's, spouse, would you ever hurt them this way, just because you could? Fuck no, she has nothing but contempt for Kyle and he will be much better without her.If you believe a big dick is all that matters in this world, than great story. When Thomas starts whoring her ass out, she might start to grow up, but that would be a different writer.

Yep, this one is right up the bonnietaylor and www slut wife plot device junk. As usual, Harry VA was right on with a decent analysis of this type of story.

I wouldn't want to see Kyle too humiliated, but Cassie needs Thomas' big cock to make her life complete. Maybe she could work a deal that she could have both of the men. Thomas could fuck her and Kyle could be the one she cuddles with when Thomas isn't there. Maybe Cassie could get Kyle to eat her out after Thomas fucks her bow-legged. Kyle could lick and suck all of the cum out of her pussy, after Thomas was done with her, he could be the clean-up boy. Hell, Cassie could give Kyle a little pussy every once in a while just to keep him hooked and have him around as back-up. I would like to see the author would write some more on this theme, and make it a real dirty story. Thanks I loved this story....Rich

But sad, sad, sad....

Likes it it must be good, p.s. how many years ago was your last piece of ass, 10,15.

now how all women work. just fuck the shit out of them and they will love you. and how you manage to do that is not really relevant. the only thing you are not aloud to be is nice and have good manners.

Throwing away all those years for a bigger cock. Hope Kyle divorces...wait a minute they aren't married...Hooray. All he has to do is throw her slut ass out or move himself. Knew there was a good reason he didn't marry her.

Ouch! I just wanted to address the comments and emails I've been getting. It's fine if you didn't like the story. Believe me, I understand. I don't cheat and never plan to, and I hope to never be cheated on. I would also classify Cassie as a bitch for what she has done. But this is a fantasy story, and in this particular case it was actually requested by a reader of this site...a female reader. Some of you just plain won't believe that, and I get that, too. I was surprised when this person emailed me and specifically requested a story about a beautiful woman in a relationship who chooses sex over love. I was also surprised when she said, though she thought it was hot, it was also something she'd never do. But then again, that is more or less what a fantasy is. Details from the color of Cassie's eyes to the way Thomas treats her like an object and wins her over anyway were specifically requested by this reader. The reader also wanted Kyle, admittedly the nice guy, to lose out. In my defense, I don't think lust wins over love in real life. I don't think the woman who requested the story thinks that either. But the idea that a night of passion could be so great that it would overcome the best feelings of your life, i.e. love, is kind of intriguing...as a fantasy. I understand if it isn't everyone's fantasy, but for some people it is. I hope more people would get that. It's kind of funny. I've written stories about fathers having sex with their daughters, and none of those have gotten even close to the amount of angry comments as this one (or maybe no angry letters...I can't be sure). Maybe that is because those stories are obviously crazy fantasies, and perhaps this one seemed too realistic. I hopes that's why. I really do. Thanks anyway for the comments, positive or negative. All of them help. And thanks for reading. This is my longest story, and I'm glad to see people actually went all the way through it regardless of what they thought of what was happening. P.S. There will be a sequel/continuation, but I don't have a timetable for it right now. -Archer

Pretty good, keeps my attention but u gotta finish the story. Is our hero replaced, does she sober up and have a OMG moment. No film?? Every goog cuck always has one. I would, and a bat and a serrated blade too

Never have I read a story on literotica than made my juices run more! I would have thought only a woman could have written this. As a woman, if you have been even close to this scene, you would not trash the concept. My husband not only accepts my LUST as I have one of these, but encouages it. No, he is not a wimp cuckhold, but one man that understands my need of an occasional romp of LUST, but also knows I always come back for love.

Thank you.

You got a real "whorror" story in progress. Great sex but sure makes Kyle look like a wimp, and Cassie a ho! Hey wait a second, that's exactly what this story's about! I hate wimps!

I think it is wrong for people to score any piece of erotic fiction on the basis of whether or not they personally approve of the morals involved.

Best story on the site, superb. I hope to read much more from you. Ignore the critics, why anyone would take time to come to this site and read stories and be offended by cheating is a nonsense. It was a great story and brilliantly written. acdd123

Nice try archer. In yoru feedback pst below you exlain HOW this story came about. Re-read what you posted.

If you or the person who suggested the story idea to you wanted the wife to cheat.... Great. But what does that have to do with <b> destroying </b> Kyle the husband.?

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what you dont Get is that by having him watch and do nothing... except get crushed at the end of the story ... you intentionally went about to create a controverisal ending... then when the reaction is too strong... you get all indignant.

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Look its your story. It si HOT and well written. But if you go out of your to get a reaction then you get one... dont complain

Harry, do you even read your posts before you submit them? There is a button at the bottom of the post that asks you to look it over before you do. Oh my, I forgot. You can't spell or write properly, my bad.

Archer:<p>High praise from 'angiequesohie' who I consider one of this site's best contributors, but I'll have to respectfully disagree somewhat with her. Your tale bears a little resemblance to a story by 'usaftnt': "Mergers and Acquisitions."<p>This was a fairly well written piece, but, for me, the back story presented at story's beginning was too perfunctory and dry. It amounted to no more than a parade of "and then....and then." I understand that this story was requested and, as such, you did your best to accede. It just seems to me that your focus was more on including all the particulars for this person than simply writing a story. If this story were meant just for her eyes, I would have no qualms. But you made it available to the masses. Not everyone is going to find her fantasy erotic, and for some, not even palatable.<p>I am puzzled by the female protagonist's behavior. I didn't find it very credible. You ascribed to her a realization of how difficult true love is find; how devoted for so very long she had been to Kyle. "...Cassie was confident enough to fully believe that nothing else the world could ever offer could compare to her man Kyle." So what happened? She is accosted by a man displaying all the trappings of a shameless lech who, apparently in Cassie's opinion, sports a large package, and she becomes a puddle of vaginal lubrication. If she were indeed that person you described early on, I would have thought she would have simply moved and sat elsewhere.<p>Cheating, as a fantasy, has it's erotic moments. But humiliation as an ingredient in erotica is something I find completely foreign. I'll never understand the part it plays as a turn-on for some folks.<p>I thought your hands were somewhat tied in writing this. You agreed to write a story which included this woman's specifics, and perhaps wrote it as well as it could be written. A woman executing a complete unexplainable "about face" in her regard for her significant other, and then unabashedly rubbing his face in her indiscretion just wasn't going to ever work for me.<p>Thanks and best regards, Philip

....sick and twisted with teen-age behaviors and Harry is correct(twice this month!)but erotic,sort of.Not a wife story though,is it?Pistolpackinpete

Very nice erotic plot, but the wife is transformed in a shameless whore just because a "super stud"?A penis with a forearm size?It´s 10,11 inches???She´s over 6 feet tall?If Kyle is a medium size(around 6 inches), even with all lubrification, it will be very painful to a normal woman take something like that in her first time with that MONSTER.And believe-me, many woman it will be disgusted to fuck with something that big.Just remember:Most of porn actors have EIGHT inches.I´m a five feet nine indian woman and ANYTHING bigger than 8 inches(and smaller than five) is OUT!

Your story is a humiliation plot, almost fetish.(Indira from Delhi)

Yuck! <p>

I watch porn and other socalled erotic engagement sometimes and I realize that some people really do --- whether through some natural inclination of somekind I don't have; or have learned the necessity to be so --- have little or no compunction when it comes to putting/injesting, accepting foreign bodily excrement, saliva, seminal fluids, and other such waste and bodily fluids INTO THEIR BODIES. <p>

I guess the hormones, or social "etiquette", are such that people's wants and needs to accept bodily fluids from others, sometimes complete strangers, over-ride their sense of cleanliness, safety, etc. But, my god, how people pass germs, viruses, and countless diseases --- many of which are very debilitating to deadly --- from one body to the next through these exchange of bodily fluids,,, it amazes me that more humans are not infected, dead, or crippled. <p>

I am actually, to be honest, rather AMAZED people are able and willing to tolerate AND "love" such foreign bodily fluid absorption from highly, sexually promiscuous individuals who mix and accept bodily fluids, infected and otherwise, from countless of their sexual partners.... <p>

I'm talking about real life situations, not stories like these, although these, we must say, likely are typical portray of real life situations real people engage in...

If you have the right to be an ass then we have the right to comment on how much of an ass you are.<P>

So push the button that means you know what free speech is and shut your pie hole unless you want more.<P>

Now to this author and his story. Well written and intended to embarrass and humiliate a man who seemed wimpish enough to be a self cuck for a whore who wanted to cuck her partner without concern for him now or later.<P>

Unlike lancie who has little talent and less respect from others, Archer has wasted his talent and credibility by spending a whole bunch of his time and talent on the very few into male humiliation and self disrespect without any intention of consequence - in fact he feverishly rolls in her disgust for her once chosen mate.<P>

Why is that aside from his need for shame and self disgust as a weak male. Hard to understand from someone with a little intelligence.<P>

A waste of resources for those who would like another decent writer with a sense of lifelike reality who could arouse and entertain who instead lavs weak male sickness from every pore.

Kudos! Can a person get overcome with lust? Why not. Circumstances that preceded her birthday night out were secure and a bit mundane. She was ripe and got (pl/f)ucked by another man, all the while her husband (who believed he had the power to stop this) did nothing but watch.

Was it a cliche that the paramour had a bigger package? Sure. In reality, all Thomas' character had to "be" was bolder and more confident - AT THIS MOMENT IN TIME - than Kyle to get what he wanted; what she wanted. She would have rationalized and excused herself sufficiently for her actions, just as most people who take the "wrong path" do so salve their soul.

First time reader. Nice to know you are here.

John

Awesome

find another woman who truly cares for him. Not a total and utter whore/slut like this woman. Your reader that asked for this story to be written for her must be some fucked up woman. She wanted her loved one to be humiliated? she wanted him to feel pain as she disrespected him so badly that most reasonable men would take a gun and blow the pair of them away. Okay it wouldn't solve anything the boyfriend/husband would still be in mental pain. but two assholes would no longer inhabit this earth so that would be a good thing. Females like your reader give other women a bad name.

Your Story needs an aftermath.How Kyle reacted after, and the wife.She looks totally braindead and cruel.

I enjoyed the story. It was interesting to see the change in the woman from someone completely true to Kyle, who through the lust she feels for Thomas can change allegiences. I think the humiliation of the husband was incredibly exciting and would love to see a sequel to find out what happened in the aftermath. Great story!!!

I didnt like the subject matter, full with cliches worthy of the typical cuckold story, but it was SO WELL WRITTEN I had to give it a ten. Good job, you stirred up my feelings. She is so overrun by lust, everything else is second place. Poor Kyle, he lost completely. 10/10

You're a fine writer but your content is nonsense. It's hard to get excited about a so called erotic encounter when the female character is apparently suffering a psychotic episode.

You know how they say the best bond films are the ones with the best villains. By making the husband so passive it made the choice too easy for the wife and in the end your story does dissolve into cliched and sad cuckolding story.

I actually liked the image of the husband holding the wife while she shook as she first kissed the lover but then you undermined your whole love vs lust theme by suggesting he did it out of weakness. Do you really think love equals weakness lust strength? Also, because the lover seemed like such a more worthwhile man it made the title irelevent "Strong Assertive Men with Giant Penises Conquer Weak Passive Husbands" would have been more appropriate. But you handled the seduction of the wife well, and it did have that one good image.

great story, hope you continue it

She wasnt in love with Kyle, It was a high school based fantasy and staying with him all those years without getting married was stupid. Now she is a fuck slut to be enjoyed by anyone dumb enough to chance diseases and wanting used merchandise. She would do everyone a favor by eliminating herself from the scene.

Overall, it is a well written story with an intense cheating aspect that raises the stakes enough for it to be a hot story however I really felt like the story was lacking in the ending.

Kyle imo did not deserve her actions and the change at the end with her smirking before going back down on Thomas seemed overly mean for the character that started in this story.

It would be an interesting follow up if Kyle learned from this event, and showed he had an advantage in oral skills winning another girl's love and affection. Show that while in this concept Lust can override love, the combination of lust and love is really where it is at.

Not what you normally write, but a change up is good sometimes. I still liked it.

though your premise is false from the start. Obviously the bitch never loved anyone but herself. She certianly couldn't have ever loved Kyle or she wouldn't have been so cruel as that last scene. To bad it doesn't have a second chapter where she finds that her keys don't fit in the locks her stuff is in the trash and Kyle has a new women. Meanwhile, her new friend doesn't want her for more than a few days of sex and she's left out in the cold

If i didn't know better i'd thought you were talking about me and my wife.But i gotta say that was the best lust story i ever heard , i would give that a 10,that gave me such a hard on.

Superb depiction of lust.

She ended up having no respect for the one she "claimed to love". If the ending were written he should kick her ass to the curb. Erotic, OK, but any woman who would treat a normal relationship like that doesn't deserve to have it survive.

She can make it away from kyle, and he can let her go, happily. The lust hit and its out now, as should he.

The last two lines were simply too delicious. You MUST write a sequel so Cassie can torture her love, Kyle, by doing so much with Thomas.

That's how you do it, first you sell the shit out of the "love", then make the stranger a decent human being, then a little first person with the husband to identify with him and reinforce the "love", then drown it in a puddle of sweat and cum, stirred with a big dick to trigger size envy. Textbook!

That's got to be worth a solid five stars! Damn these fuckers that can't rate their disgust a five! :)

PS: It's missing a good dose of the slut's internal struggle though.

I love it when a story grabs me and takes me somewhere totally different than I expect. So well done. I felt completely wrung out at the end.. Thank you for such a delightful experience.

She should of got up when done and asked Thomas if he thought she didn't know what her body could do. Then went to Kyle!

Enough said.

The humiliation Cassie inflicted upon Kyle is unpardonable. The idea that the premise for the story and the details were requested and supplied by a female reader...wow. Horrifying. She should seek professional help if this is what excites her. God help any man unfortunate enough to be in her web.

Where's the wife in this tale? Wrong category - Erotic Coupling or Fetish would be better.

Kyle is the stereotypical hospital mistake - they threw away the baby instead of the afterbirth. And the girl's nothing more than a skanky ho.......wonder how similar her character is to the woman who asked you to write this?

Still, the writing is hot even if the subject runs along the lines of Karen Kay, StormX and BobnBobbi. 3*** but if the guy had a spine - more stars for sure. Will check the rest of your work - I may find a gem!

slut, dumb ass husband = fucked up slut and cuck till death

Kyle must of felt like a third wheel. Kyle realizes that he has lost Cassie no matter what she may be thinking. The only good thing was that they are not married and that Kyle knows that there is no future with Cassie. She has tasted Thomas and she will always want more whether it is Thomas or someone else. Kyle knows he must move on to find someone who he can always trust. Thanks for writing.

but the body goes with it. TK U MLJ LV NV

With regret I am informing fellow fans that there will be no more Archer2050 stories. I was contacted by Archer's co-writer and he told me that, in his words "the driving imagination behind Archer 2050" is no longer with us.

He asked me to pass the news along if I could. Hopefully, it is appropriate to let everyone know at the end of his last story.

no guy isgoing to sit through that so stupied she was a whore he shoul have kicked both there ass out

Cassie was a brain-dead whore. She doesn't know what love is. You can't go from 'loving someone with all your heart and never taking them for granted' to 'fucking another man as you look him in the eyes and show him your cum-filled mouth' and STILL claim to love him. Fucking bullshit. This deserves a zero, but I'll give it a one because at least the one star seems to indicate that you hated the story

I’ve seen it and, without being present, been Kyle. His funk will pass and he will move on, thanking his lucky stars that she abandoned him before they married. Cassie will never replicate the lust of that night and likely spend a lifetime regretting her surrender of love, a much rarer and precious thing.

This may be the best erotic writing I have ever read. My only qualm was Kyle.

Sorry, not believable. Yet another “Big dick experience completely changes an otherwise normal woman so profoundly she gives up the man she has loved for years” story. As if relationships were nothing but sex. Plus, the story is not finished. Lazy writing.

When did the author get so brain dead? Did u not have a mother? You are so far off about female behaviour.. it almost looks like u were born to a pig… not a woman

For a wife that 'loves good sweet Kyle', she sure doesn't seem to mind gutting him.

Cheating bitch and he’s a cuck. Divorce her

Scores 1/5

I read Archer2050 is no longer writing, thank God.

I hope he’s better at his day job

No love here, what's the point?

Wow its so hard once a wife finds out her husband is gay to get him to watch her with another dude.

Its like asking a child if he wants candy or a new toy. Obviously a gay husband would salivate over another dick being within sight range.

Hot! Wish there was a part 2.

Great writing with a sad, crappy ending.

The usual cuck & slut story. Doesn't matter about how many years she's with him or that she loves him; that's just bullshit to make the transition into being a slut seem more shocking. No woman in her right mind would fall for the shit Thomas was saying. It's such an obvious play on insecurities. A woman that really loved her partner especially after that many years together wouldn't give him the time of day. Of course we all know this but it's LW so we put all the sensibilities to the side and embrace the fact that here every wife is a cheating slut (or at least can easily turn into one) and every guy is either a poor sap or a cuck.