All Comments on 'Millie's Man'

I really don't know how This author took the invitational And decided to come up with the stupidest dumbest most ignorant clueless fuckstick on the history of the human species

A JPB winner!

5

What a moron

I enjoyed the story, especially the twist at the end. Five stars. ~~JBE

Incredibly stupid characters as always, especially the male characters in this writers 'stories'.

A shit writer as always! One thing about this shithole…atleast he is consistent in churning out shit stories taht suck!!

Needs a part two

FTDS. I LOVE YOUR ENTIRE BODY OF WORK. THIS ONE BLEW, HOWEVER.

No confrontation and unfinished again.

More cuck rubbish.

Another Home Run for JPB! 5 stars It Great theme, Great writing, Great story, and Great Fact of life. It is an amazing fact that a woman can be a whore one night but in the morning take shower get cleaned up and look as innocent as can be when dressed. LOL If you doubt her best keep an eye on her. Trust But Verify! Thank You JPB

My Millie,words from a wimp. Nice joke

Needs just a little more to finish it up

Not up to usual standards. Best abstain from submitting that our poor work.

Nice start but how dumb is this guy?

He was way too over the top of a truly clueless idiot. Love may be blind but it still isn''t stupid.

Ugh, not good at all.

You have a lot of good stories. This isn’t one of them!

*****

Well done. Great ending.

Well don't stop there.

Normally, the mothers of girls like that LOVED the poor sap who finally married her.

How do you spell divorce? That's after the DNA test that is mandatory. Bob is one slow on tbe take dummy.

Was this even a story? Just seemed to be a running line of stupidity. Which Bob wrote this garbage

Don’t care how besotted a guy is or how much in love or lust, when a girlfriend continually treats you like shit then you dump her. The first time she does it might be a mistake, the second time sets a red flag flying, the third time is a pattern, no need to worry about a fourth time because the bitch be gone.

But this is a JPB story so if he actually got around to an epilogue you would find out she told the dupe it was a rare case of atavism, a throwback to ancestors from other races, guess what yeah they lived happily ever after, she realised he was too stupid to be out on his own and idiots don’t really need much to keep them happy plus felt sorry for the chump.

Mark this one down as another of this authors CCC’s (clueless college cuckold) stories, he has lots of them.

Don’t care how besotted a guy is or how much in love or lust, when a girlfriend continually treats you like shit then you dump her. The first time she does it might be a mistake, the second time sets a red flag flying, the third time is a pattern, no need to worry about a fourth time because the bitch be gone.

But this is a JPB story so if he actually got around to an epilogue you would find out she told the dupe it was a rare case of atavism, a throwback to ancestors from other races, guess what yeah they lived happily ever after, she realised he was too stupid to be out on his own and idiots don’t really need much to keep them happy plus felt sorry for the chump.

Mark this one down as another of this authors CCC’s (clueless college cuckold) stories, he has lots of them.

Nice story. This guy deserves what he gets. Stupid as a rock.

Just Plain Stupid...

nauseating for me.

Needs a part Two

Good start,

Cucky bob strikes again

@JBEdwards, what twist? Anyone could see that coming a mile away,

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Even if he thought they were yanking his chain, why not dump the drinks and fake passing out, just to be sure.

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So much was based on her "promise to her mother," but who knows if she ever made that promise?

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Needs a confrontation.

WTF was this? You've written a lot of two star stories but this one wins.

Just a chopped down version of another story already posted

True to form for JPB. As distasteful as it is, he followed the story invitation to the letter. At least he left us hope that this latest idiot he has created has finally gotten a clue. Let’s hope he can apologize to his best friend.

Nobody could be that stupid.

Just not a good story

He was born at night in a turnip patch right. You left that out of your story.

walked right off that cliff

Just a hurtful story. However that’s typical for the great JPB. Just blow off the good guys as you tend to do.

Felt phoned in. Far from your best.

A horrible story.

Don’t much enjoy JPB’s storylines but my best friend for 50 years falls into a similar category as Bob. As unfortunate as it may be, there are really guys like Bob. They even write songs about them, right? But it’s hard for me to condemn them.

Until you know one; a cuck, a wimp, a Bob and that they can’t be any other way, you realize just how sad it is for them. And you thank God you’re not built that way.

Love can make shit smell like perfume!

Disappointing ... wonder if he ever found that left handed monkey wrench or cup of air at work?

I wondered why the low score - then saw you committed the "cardinal sin" of not having the cheating wife drawn and quartered. Always amazing to me people read free stories they don't like, then take more time explaining why. Seems to me you found one of many good stories which can emerge when a man loves a woman. Well done 5, from me.

Unusually - unfinished

I know it's only fiction but it has to be at least a little bit believable to be interesting. But In real life no one is a stupid as "Bob" and no woman is an enormous slut like "Millie" .

my Millie, my Millie, my Millie

Gotta say that this is the first JPB story I have ever disliked.

Well…THAT was different. A guy who was even dumber than a girl who overdosed on the Martian Slut Ray 😎

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It was almost painful to continuously keep reading about how STUPID this guy was.

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2 **

No way. D

Read it despite the low rating. I will refrain from giving it a score.

Ignore the naysayers. You nailed the theme of the song, which, I think, is more difficult than you make it seem.

JPB shits out another one.

Yeah, too loosely is the word "Man" used here. But it started with the song, right? "When A Man Loves A Woman" But of course the title is a misnomer, considering what the lyrics describe. The title of the song should be "When A Dumb Shit Loves A Whore." Now the lyrics make sense, and instead of being a sad ballad it is a funny lampoon. I can almost see Benny Hill, or John Belushi, singing it. Yeah, Darwin has a plan for those men. At least the dumb shit in this story won't be polluting the gene pool any worse than his whore is. Thanks for the effort, and for participating. I think this story earned a participation trophy.

That’s it? FTDS

Read better!

Makes no sense, he heard them say they would slip him something but went ahead and left. He at least wouldn’t have accepted any drinks - nobody would if they heard someone was going to drug them.

I know Yanks are dumb but this guys the dumbest of the dumb.

Thanks for sharing...

The end just doesn't make any sense to me.

Much of it was cut/paste, at least plot points, from other stories by you. 3*

Worse one yet sorry one star.

the MC is far too stupid, and Millie too much of a slut to even allow for suspension of belief. You can do better than this.

Nearly as stupid as your other stories !

I normally love your stories but this is about a third of a story and.... nobody is that stupid

No one is that blindly stupid.... not believable at all. Still love your writing!

"Shut your lying fucking mouth! Millie isn't that way! I don't know what your problem with her is, but just stay the fuck away from me from now on" I snarled and walked away from him."

- That's no longer a love story, and that's not a guy "blinded by love", as the event described. Eyploding like that to someone you've known as your friend your entire life, because he's saying the same thing you've heard MULTIPLE TIMES before? That dude is deluding himself, because he's grasping at an idealized fantasy of a woman. That's some serious stalker-vibes I'm getting here.

Sorry, but this is probably the worst story I have read from you so far.

I try to not be overly critical, I really do. That being said, there are several things about this story that are utterly RIDICULOUS. The MC is far too dense and Millie is far too slutty. Anon also mentioned that However, the thing that really puts this ridiculousness over the top is that Millie is fucking everything with a dick and a pulse, yet won't give THE GUY SHE'S GOING TO MARRY the time of day? I'm sorry Bob, but that's just too fucking stupid to take. I hate to give comments like this, and I hate to give 1 star ratings, but that last point I made MORE than warrants it.

Your stories are generally really good. This one not so much, nothing in the story and MC was just to moronic to believe,

This is pretty bad.

Sorry JPB, this one goes in the trash pile.

Unfinished story, but the raw emotions are powerful.

He has to be the biggest moron on this planet….who chooses to believe a whore over a friend

I think Bobs point is that love makes you that stupid. Thanks Bob. KS

One word for “Bob”: Annulment.

I always knew that JPB and JBE sucked and masturbated each other !! Today they both confirmed it!

Oh, fuck off. I know you love writing clueless cucks, but come the fuck on, man! This is so unbelievably stupid, it makes the other shit you've written look like Cervantes.

i think you've lost it Bob....maybe a little vacation is in order..

Not near your best effort, especially for an invitational from our beloved Blackrandi. very predictable. But you are still one of the better writers on this site and one of my favourites. Wishes of Health Wealth and Happiness for you and yours

This is not a JPB story, has someone taken over the JPB nom du plume

This isn't even good enough to qualify as stupid.

God you write such shitty stories.

And then?

Nah. Didn’t buy it. Nobody has that much denial for that long. No sell.

Damn. She played him for real. Short and to the point. 5*

Sad story, still 5*

Just about had to hit him over the head with a 2x4.

some ppl just aren't worth the resources, some stories aren't worth writing

That's it?

Good take on the challenge. His birthday eyes were opened at the end. Thanks for writing and for participating in Randi’s challenge.

Tolerable as comedy ... just.

Cuck writer and a cuckold story

Story sucks

Story sucks as the MC is obviously a high grade moron, all those warnings and the idiot didn’t pay attention? He even heard them say they were going to drug, now he’s married the slut and basically ruined his life

Ok very stupid MC, where’s the rest of the story?

I liked it, but, this Femdom agitprop didn’t develop properly, just fizzled out.

waste...sad when a writer with amazing talent writes something like this

All for the best. He's too stupid to reproduce

Sadly one of JPBs alltime worst.

Inhate these I'll just Finnish a story stories...fill in the middle...end it not just I'll leave it to the reader

Not your best…. Thank you for the story.