All Comments on 'Mom's Computer'

I love reading fantasies about mind and sons .but believe me

The reality is much better once the initial shock has been talked

Over then its the most loving and adventures sex you could imagine and you'll

Never make love to anyone else with that intensity of feeling ever again .its pure love

Yeah your story was a bit rushed, but oh well. Sometimes I like stories that get straight to the points.

There were a few typos, but they were easy enough to read around. What there was, is very hot and erotic sex story between a mom and her son.

I thought it was great that she wasn't going out and fuck some strangers, but staying home with her son and making love to him.

It would be great to read what they did the next day, especially if his mom gave herself to him as his forever lover and kept herself just for her son.

Thanks for the hot read.

Typos are to be expected, I mean, this IS an amateur site. Why it seems rushed, at least to me, is there are so many missing words. My brain 'sees' the typos and corrects them easily, but when I find myself having to fill in the blanks it gets a bit on the tedious side.

Good story, would be better with all the words in it. Maybe you should read it carefully before posting a story.

dezurtdawg

I liked your writing style.

It is true that once mom is clicked there is lot to explore like Ass fuck or anal.

Pushing the cock in ass cushions of Mom is best feeling.

Then suddenly, fuck the build up, just "I walked into her room and shoved my cock in her face", with zero prior interaction, just Wham, bam, thank you ma'am, and that's all she wrote. Pity. This had potential, but was spoiled by impatience.

fucking gay story 1 star

Slow down and feel the zone. Ease into situations and keep it going for grand finales. Keep the women happy and coming, back for more, even if they knew nothing of the other's fulfillment. Slowing down would have resulted in a more cohesive story, and added to more intimate happenings. Good but can be better, with a rewrite.

You're so lucky, all I ever got was a feel of my mother's heavy breasts and to stoke her ass; then, NO, had to make do with sucking her dirty panties and wearing her under clothes - envious

OOF!