All Comments on 'Mom's Soft Wares'

good story telling. you may like to write a sequel of this once both mon son characters return home.

You need to edit the part about the mom taking a couple of bottles to the beach. They were in another room before going to the beach.

Other than that, great story. Would love to see a sequel. Maybe finding out the sisters had stayed around for a while.

This is yet another story where the author doesn't understand lay/lie.

Fabulous story-telling, though.

she new what she was doing. by not continuing, prove's one thing. she is a controling bitch! no way!

...just saying...

Hey, I think the story was great but if I could add some criticism I would say that th ending felt a little rushed. Other than that thanks for the great story.

This was extremely well written. Yes, a little rushed at the end but all in all well done. This is the first story ive ever commented on but i liked it so much i just had to say something. I hope to see more submissions :)

First time i have read any of your work and i am suitably impressed.Was a little hurried but so was my release so no har in that.Would love to have had a follow up story but that will have to stay locked away in my imagination

My son told me about this one. As others said, a bit rushed at the end. Still, I did cum twice during it.

Signed Colleen Michelle Knight. Whore for you and your mum.

Liked reading this story. Erotic and well Written. Little rushed at the end; would like to see what happened the next day etc. For example Mom teaching him some kink, anal, and femdom. Look forward to reading more.

J

A truely enjoyable story. I hope the next part is as good.

I loved it. The story actually got me a little nervous during some parts. Great character drama and situation build up. I want you to do another one.

I don't know how many time I've come back to this story. It bares re-reading over and over. That's the sign of a well written story. Thanks!

I've read one similar to this, but this one has a lot of differences. At least in this one he isn't lost in a hormonal daze. That bit about not picking at it sounds really whiny.

The story is almost 2.5 pages long and the sex is only 2 paragraphs.

Your spelling errors detract from the story. I got three paragraphs into it and couldn't keep going.

Really enjoyed this one. Keep it up(pardon the pun).

Could of taken it to some very different stages, re the two girls.

But in the end, it was an incest story.

Nice one.

Drop me a line if you put any more up on here.

it's nice. but ending is cutting the most of thrill... good job Thanks...

Please write a sequel

I think you did very good. I'll have to admit, though, that I HAVE in reality tried to make love with a sunburn. Its nearly impossible. I was incredibly horney and so was she. We didn't know we could sunburn on a cloudy day! She doesn't shave, and has an incredibly thick bush, so her kitty lips didn't fry. But her nipples and my penis AND nipples did! I won't try to describe the position we had to use to not rub our bodys against each other. When my (well lubricated) dick entered her the pain was incredible and each stroke was as well. When she came and then I came, we collapsed. Didn't - either one of us - want to cuddle or kiss or even TOUCH. I hope, in my fantasy, that your charachers encounter isn't a one time thing. That they come together again and Mom overcomes her problem with the taboo even when she's sober and hydrated. Of course, it is always easier to be looser when away from home. Thats what Honeymoons are for. The couple goes to a place for a time that they are both relatively new to. I like this and won't pick at it.

Good story, but I thought you lost an opportunity to make it better by not getting into the mother's head. It seems she's egging her son on: going to a nude beach, thinking it's okay when he joins her, being comfortable when he strips, extending her stay in the hotel without making sure there are two beds. Just like his well told story of dealing with his burgeoning desire for his mother was fun and sexy, hers for him would have been so also.

I see you have not posted for some years and any hope for a follow up is probably in vain, but to have these two characters still living together trying to process several hours of exquisite sex would sure love a sequel.

I thought story was really good I didnt mean to only give it one star

Really good story

Very well done. I have enjoyes it more than the last few stories Ive read. I would like to see more of this.

I have really enjoyed this one , but lets be honest here , i don't care how horny you are if your sunburnt as bas as those 2 were , then there is no way your will be able to touch your self never mind fucking the shit out of yes even his mum lol , but as a story it was erotic , funny but overall well worth 5 stars and enjoyable read .

Thank you for taking the time to write your stories for us your readers ,

This story is twenty years old. I wish it could be reposted. Doing that it might get the recognition it deserves. Such a shame the author has only posted two stories. This is one of my all time favourites. Well done and thank you.

Very good ,enjoyable story!!