All Comments on 'Moving Day'

by Middleagepoet

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oldwayne over 14 years ago

Nice little tale.

I just wish it had been longer.

blackstallion21 over 14 years ago

not bad at all

nice cute story.

Anonymousover 14 years ago

And now for Chapter 2

Really enjoyed this one, now let's have chapter 2, all the way... but ignore other readers, stories don't have to be long to be good. This was just about the right length. same again would be good (personal preference I know but hey why ruin a good story with extra lines).

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